Power Play - Revamped n Repowered (Patreon)

This took a bit longer to put together than I thought it would, but I am very happy with the result.

In my review of older art, I put myself to the task of going through all the pages from Power Play. I think there was a lot of room for improvement. I did a number of color and line edits across a chunk of panels, and rewrote pretty much all the dialogue.

When I set out to make a webcomic on Patreon, I made myself a general script for all the events of the comic, then went ahead and made it page by page each month. I learned pretty fast that I'm definitely NOT good at doing this kind of thing. I'm way more comfortable writing stuff in bigger chunks. In re-reading the pages, I still liked what was there, but it felt disjointed. So now it's changed. Some stuff to look forward to:

•Color updates

•Drake is snarkier

•The demon king finally gets a name.... King Sethan! And he actually talks little bit (when Drake is not plugging his throat.)

I hope the comic is more entertaining this time around. With this revamp and Aftermath done, I can move on to more new stuff.

For new patrons who don't have the earlier pages and want the comic right away in full, it's available on gumroad: https://gum.co/wSKs

If you have been a patron for a long time and already have all the pages, please message me requesting the new release. You'll get an exclusive Hi Res version of the comic :)

I attached a preview of the first 4 pages of the revamp to the post. Check em out in the attachments.