Chapter 1 - Scene 1 (Patreon)

To start off the story we find Naomi sitting in her bedroom late at night when she gets a text from her best friend Syn. Syn suggests that she needs to quit being such a prude and break out of her shell, and figure out what she likes sexually. Naomi is nervous, but curious to tap into her naughty side so she takes Syn's advice to figure out what turns her on, but just as in Naomi's clumsy personality things don't quite go as planned.

Note from xide: I tried to keep the story shorter with fewer images as suggested, and I hope to make the next scene even better...but we all have to start somewhere and learn from mistakes as well as successes. I would love your input from what you think of the first scene, so I know where should i improve upon. This was also my first attempt to make a text  conversation on a phone, so I know it's not perfect but I will improve upon it as well. I just figured showing a screen would be better than using speech bubbles on the image...what do you think? 

I hope to have the next scene done this week and the story will pick up from Syn's point of view at her apartment. 

Also if anyone has suggestions for a title to the overall story i'd love to hear them.