A free-form poem, and two sketch pages (Patreon)
Published:
2017-04-23 11:38:20
Edited:
2017-11-14 09:52:52
Imported:
2021-02
Content
So, I've taken a poetry class this year in which we're commonly have a free-form stream of conscientiousness excessive to get ideas for poems.
This lesson I wrote a short story which inspired me to draw some rough sketches featuring internals imagery which I'd probably use at some point.
The poem is written in Hebrew handwriting which I'd probably translate when I could:
It's about myself getting irritated with having piece of food stuck in my teeth, following me summoning my shrunken friend to go inside my mouth and cleaning it up.
Once inside I give him a toothpick to clean it, but he's being too forceful and him hurting me causes me to accidentally swallow.
It then goes to his perspective as he's tumbling down my throat, listens to the sound of my beating heart and breathing lungs, until he reaches my stomach orifice, standing on it for a short time, before being pushed through, feet first and falling down, landing in a splat.
This lesson I wrote a short story which inspired me to draw some rough sketches featuring internals imagery which I'd probably use at some point.
The poem is written in Hebrew handwriting which I'd probably translate when I could:
It's about myself getting irritated with having piece of food stuck in my teeth, following me summoning my shrunken friend to go inside my mouth and cleaning it up.
Once inside I give him a toothpick to clean it, but he's being too forceful and him hurting me causes me to accidentally swallow.
It then goes to his perspective as he's tumbling down my throat, listens to the sound of my beating heart and breathing lungs, until he reaches my stomach orifice, standing on it for a short time, before being pushed through, feet first and falling down, landing in a splat.