Kinniku Kiss Chapter Five Rough Script (Patreon)

Sorry to keep you all waiting, but I finally managed to rough out the script for Chapter 5 of The Kinniku Kiss. This chapter will feature Hinata's transformation, and hopefully will do a fine job of advancing the story. Not to mention setting up everything that comes next. So enjoy!

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The Kinniku Kiss Chapter 5

Naruto:

Uh, Hiashi? Are you sure moving Hinata was a good idea?

I mean – I'm not an expert at first aid, but Sakura was always telling me that you should never move someone that's been badly hurt unless you absolute have to!

Hiashi:

It's not my first choice, Naruto, but I do believe it was the right thing to do.

The people of this village have been on edge since Pain's assault let the Hidden Leaf in ruins. It'd be best if we could contain this situation without them knowing what's going on.

Also, it'd be much better for everyone involved if Danzo wasn't to learn of this. Even if he's bound to find out eventually…the longer we can keep it a secret from him, the better it would be for everyone.

Naruto:

I – guess so. But…Hinata, she…she's feeling colder. And I -!

Hiashi:

Wait! I think I see -!

Yes! Here they come!

Hiashi Clone:

There they are! Over there!

Sakura:

I see them! And -!

Naruto?! I – what happened to you?!

Naruto:

Sakura! Focus! Hinata, she -?!

Sakura: Right, right! You can tell me about – whatever later!

Hmm…this isn't good…

Broken bones…and it looks like there's internal bleeding. I -!

Hiashi:

Sakura, please! I – this is my daughter, and -!

Sakura:

I know, Lord Hiashi!

I'll – I'll do whatever I can.

Sakura is healing Hinata, but she starts tiring.

Naruto:

Hey, Sakura? Are you alright? You're looking…kinda tired.

Sakura:

I'm alright, Naruto. It's Hinata I'm worried about.

Whatever it was that – well, Lord Hiashi's shadow clone didn't give me any real details. But…

The internal damage…it's severe. Healing it is taking a lot of chakra.

And I'm…not sure I have enough…

Naruto:

Not enough chakra…?

…!

Sakura, what if you had more chakra? I mean a lot more!

Hiashi:

Naruto, don't even think it! You already know that -!

Naruto: I know, but I wasn't thinking of giving it to Sakura! I mean – what if I gave it to Hinata?!

Sakura:

What are you talking about?!

Wait…

Naruto, are you suggesting giving Hinata some of your chakra? Listen, I appreciate it, but – transferring chakra is really tricky, even for a trained medical ninja!

Naruto:

I know all about that! Granny Tsunade gave me a lecture about that earlier!

But – we've got to try something! And besides, this Heavy Chakra could heal Granny, right?! Maybe it could help Hinata!

Sakura:

Heavy Chakra?!

What are you talking about?! Does this have to do what that special project Lady Tsunade's been working on?!

Hiashi:

In short, yes.

But…Naruto, you do realize what would happen…?

Naruto:

I know! Believe me, I know!

But…what will happen to her if I don't?

Hiashi:

…

Very well. Proceed…but be careful.

Sakura:

Be careful with what?! Naruto, Lord Hiashi, why -?!

N-N-N-Naruto?! What do you think you're doing?!

Hiashi:

He's transferring chakra to my daughter. Now stay focused on healing her.

Sakura:

Transferring chakra via mouth-to-mouth?! Well, it's possible, but -!

Wait a second…!

This – this chakra, it – feels so different! So…heavy!

It feels like…omigosh!

Naruto, keep it up! Whatever this crazy chakra is, I can feel it acting like a natural catalyst for Hinata's own healing!

If I can just even distribute this chakra throughout her chakra network…and then work with it in healing her injuries…it just might do the trick!

Naruto:

*thinking* Gotta keep going! Gotta give Hinata as much chakra as I can! And hope like crazy that that serum of Granny Tsunade's doesn't pick now to wear off!

Sakura:

This is good! Completely crazy, but good! This chakra…it's so easy to work with! It's like it was made for healing!

Hinata's cells are regenerating beyond – anything I've ever seen before! Just a bit more work here, and the worst of her wounds will be healed in no time!

That's it…keep it up, Naruto! Just a bit more, and -!

Hiashi:

Wait…the chakra levels are intensifying! And it's transitioning into that new form we saw earlier! The hotter version!

Naruto, get away! Hinata, she's going to -!

Massive surge of chakra explodes of Hinata's mouth and sends Naruto flying.

Naruto:

GAAAHHHH!!!!

Aw, dammit…that was- oh, boy…!

Here we...go again…!

Sakura:

What the hell!?

What's that chakra doing to – to it?! I mean him?! I mean -?!

Hinata:

Ohhhh…!

Hiashi:

Hinata? Are you alright?

Hinata:

Uh…Father? Where -?

Naruto:

Hey, Hinata! How're you feeling?!

Hinata:

How am I -?!

N-Naruto?! You – you got – you're so -!

Sakura:

Yeah, what's up with that?! And that?!

Hiashi:

Sakura, please! We'll explain later!

And – Hinata – you…you were badly injured. And…Naruto needed to give you some Heavy Chakra. So that Sakura could save you.

Hinata:

Wh-what?! You – gave -?!

That means – Naruto, he -!

Hiashi:

He did. So…I'm afraid we all know what comes next.

Sakura:

Not all of us know! So what is this?! What's going on?!

Naruto:

I think you're about to find out!

Hinata?!

Hinata:

Oh! Oh, my…my blood! It's – on fire!

I – I'm going to -!

Gyaaaahh!!!!

Sakura:

What the hell?! Hinata, she's – she's swelling up like crazy!

Naruto:

Yeah! She's getting bigger than Granny Tsunade!

Sakura:

Lady Tsunade?! What's been going on here?!

Hiashi:

Wait…something's wrong! Hinata! She -!

Hinata starts transforming more completely, sprouting extra arms.

Naruto:

Wha-?! Four arms?!

What've we done to her?!

Hinata falls to her knees and the third eye emerges. Finally, the transformation is complete with Hinata far more massive than before.

Sakura:

…

Wha…? I…? Huh…?

Would someone mind telling me what's going on here?!

Naruto:

Hinata?! Are you alright?!

I mean – you're still you, right? Not like the Scary Snake Lady?

Sakura: 

Scary snake lady?! You mean Anko?!

Hinata:

Oh…N-Naruto?

I…I'm okay. I mean, I…uh…

Hinata realizes that she's naked. Cries out in dismay while covering herself up.

Hinata:

I – four arms?! What happened?!

Sakura:

That's what I want to know!

Naruto:

I have no idea!

Hiashi:

I – I'm not sure, Hinata. But we don't have time for this right now. Anko's still on the loose. And we need to deal with her.

Sakura:

Anko's on the loose?! Wait – are you saying that she's the one that attacked Hinata?!

Naruto:

Yeah! Only something went really crazy when I gave her this chakra and it combined with her Curse Mark!

Sakura:

Her Curse Mark?! Wait, Anko has a Curse Mark?!

Naruto:

Yeah, it's crazy! And now Granny Tsunade and Shizune are trying to stop her! But now the Scary Snake Lady is a great big snake monster! And I'm not sure if they're -!

!

Hiashi:

Naruto?

Naruto, what is it?

Naruto:

I've got an idea! It's kinda crazy, but – it might just work!

We need to find Granny Tsunade!

Hiashi:

Find – Naruto, are you planning on -?!

But – Lady Tsunade and the others are likely fighting Anko now! Who wants more Heavy Chakra!

If she were to absorb even more from you, then -!

Naruto:

I know, I know!

But what do you think will happen if they can't stop her?!

Hiashi:

…

A valid point.

Very well. I'll lead the way.

Sakura:

Hey, would somebody mind telling me what's going on here?!

Hiashi:

…

Naruto:

Oh! Well, um – Sakura, it's like -!

Hinata:

It's okay, Naruto, Father! You go ahead and help the others!

I'll – tell Sakura about what's been happening!

Naruto:

Huh? Are you sure?! I mean – you were kind of out for some of what happened!

Hinata:

I know. But – I think I know enough to explain everything to Sakura. At least the important parts.

Hiashi:

Alright. And I'll send a shadow clone to gather…well, something for you to wear.

Hinata:

Uh, right. Um…thanks, Father.

Naruto and Hiashi leave.

Sakura:

Okay, Hinata, now could you please tell me what's going on?! I mean – how -?

Hinata:

Of course! But…

Could we…get further into those trees? I…really don't want...anybody…seeing me like…well…

Sakura:

Sure, no problem! I -!

Uh…

Hinata:

Sakura?

What is it? Is something wrong?

Sakura:

Oh, it's nothing! Really…eh-heh…!

Inner Sakura:

Are you freaking kidding me?! She already had a bigger chest! And now she gets breasts bigger than my head?! What, does the universe just hate me?! Is that it?! Cha!!

Sakura:

Let's get you out of sight. And then you can get me caught up on this mess!