[Manga Draft] Page 07 - Control Room (Patreon)

I want to wrap up this page very soon. This short dialogue scene will serve as a transition scene to the main location where everything takes place: The ship. This is a conversation between the vice captain and the coordination assistant where they're commenting on the radiation activity outside. (Short memo: A small text change on page 3 need to be made, since page 7 and 8 are the point where the reader actually learn that everything takes place on a big ship. Just a subtle change, but it can stir some narrative tension, I think.) 

There was a dialogue between the staff members revolving around the radiation and the possibility of a xenobeast summon in the old version right after the introduction scene of Chaudine and Leroy.  I decided to move this scene to an earlier point, so that it can serve as a transition to Taya's introduction in turn, since it became a crucial plot point that the vortex phenomenon (that eventually summon the xenobeast) happens when Taya's scene is taking place in parallel.