[Chapter 1 Re-edition] Noise from the outside (WIP) (Patreon)

A redrawn version of the old page number 14 (It will have a higher page number in the new version).

The composition looks almost like the previous version. Textures and crosshatching are still missing, but I already like how the lineart turned out. It looks more refined to me. I feel like Chaudine has gotten easier to draw with her new design now.