[Chapter 1 - Re-edition] P.04 - Two Nations (Patreon)

Redraw Chapter (incomplete) :
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1MzIBygqygtSJn35nDKI4CCuSasPsl55o

Page 04 is complete for now. I still need to do a few corrections and also think that my English text sounds a bit clumsy here, thus I still need to proofread it, before I can make a check on this one.

I racked my brain a while over the new direction I want to go with the rewritten script and I eventually decided to shortly introduce those two nations to hint the large-scale conflict that lies in the sub-plot of the first chapters. After all I also felt that the introduction of Winrow's father, the general, as seen on this page, who made a brief appearance, came a bit out of nowhere and felt more like a distraction of the main plot. I thought it would be better to make use of the prologue set-up and give him a more fearsome first impression to properly build up his actual introduction in the later chapters.

In the first panel you can also see  a small portion of the new redrawn world map. I was just done with redrawing the whole map. Patreon pledgers of the 2nd tier can get an early preview of the new refined map already.