Redraw of Act 1 (First 40 Pages) (Patreon)

Phew, it took a lot o time, but it's finally done. I redrew the first 40 pages to keep the screen tone, lines and general birghtness consistent. Also did some correctures, like the looking direction of some characters.

There are also some mistakes I made in the earlier version. Like the usage of right and left hands as shown in the example above. Of course it took a lot of time to go through all the pages, but since I already work on the german translation at the same time, I thought, that this was a neccessary step which has to be done anyway sooner or later.

The most crucial change was adding Tsulins magic seal in this fighting scene since I thought it would be better to integrate some of the seals sooner. It isn't a drastic change which has any impact for the story though.

Another neccessary step was changing some speedlines to make the fighting and monster scenes appear more dynamically. The initial reason for this whole reupload was eventually a test print of my first pages for a potential preview version. I was quite suprised how dark the pages look. The main reason for that look was because I drew on a darker brownish canvas on my first pages. But since it was time consuming to coloring all the white areas afterwards and also exhausting to look at the darker pages, I decided to use the white canvas from this point on. I will prepare a ZIP for download with all recreated pages when my prologue chapter ends!