Cougars Ep 04 Quick feedback (Patreon)

Almost finished with the next main video (just the audio and some corrections are missing), but before keep going i would like your feedback about 

• Illumination: This scene will take place with a dim lights at the room to give a special mood to it, however i don't want to exaggerate with it so let me know if the scene is bright enough, the second screenshot is the darkest a scene will look, the rest will be mostly brighter or light focusing on a specific spot, the first one is how the static images currently look like (i'll be balancing brightness, for whatever reason for this video the brightness/contrast from images and video have a notable difference which i'll be adjusting)

• Dialogue: just like last time (Detention Hour) i would like to know if the current font size is easy enough to read. this font is much easier to read than the Detention Hour one so it may not require to be that big