Large number of edits (Patreon)

Rather than spend today creating new content, I went back and have done a lot of editing on Chapters 1-11. I'm really pleased with the improvements.

You can see from the attached screenshot, just how extensive they have been!

I'm hoping to get 12-22 patched up like this as well, the later ones hopefully before they are released! I've found an editor to work with who is really amazing and helpful, but this stuff takes time.

Admittedly I'm the type of writer who doesn't enjoy editing very much!