New title. (Patreon)

Hi guys! Thank you so much for your help on this weeks video. Since this topic is a bit different I need a lot of feedback. What do you think of the following title:

"Is detachable aircraft cabins a good idea? Mentour Pilot explains"

I know that a shorter one would be preferable but I'm struggling to come up with one that works

The finished thumbnail is attached for your info.