Succubi at work discussion (Patreon)

So I think  I'm going to go for 12 main illustrations in total ( some of them with multiple panels ) and there is going to be a non-determined-yet number of small panels. Pretty much like usual in graphic novel :3

The base story can be read here:  https://aryion.com/g4/view/17472   Keep in mind It's one of the first thing I ever submitted as well as being the only story I wrote in english so it has aged quite a bit. It could definitely use some rework ^^; 

Here is how we're going to do this :)

There are 6 parts I'm going to pick to illustrate. Parts i think are either essential for the flow ( or that I just really want to draw XD) And 6 parts you guys get to chose.  

Illustration 1:

In the middle of the room were three gigantic females, each lying lazily on the floor. Their impossible size dwarfed even the surrounding structures and their awesome dimensions

This one pretty much set the stage. I'd see it as a wide, almost panoramic view as to both show the entire scene and to convey the feeling of shock of the prisoners. 

 Illustration 2: 

She closed her eyes and opened her mouth very wide; after a few seconds, Sardon realized she was only yawning. 

The prisoner in her hand was given a full view of the moist, red cavern in front of him during the process, and he began to thrash and kick wildly in her grasp. 

The demoness smiled innocently.

"You don't enjoy the view, mortal ?"

Introducing the red-headed succubus, Sybarith here. I also like the idea of a simple yawn for the succubus turning into something much more intimidating for the prey ^^ Great mawshot opportunity too ! 

 Illustration 3:

-He tried to resist his captor, but he was no match for the massive demon hustling him toward the hungry giantess. She was more than ready for him, her huge legs spread wide apart, nonchalantly exposing her broad, pink slit; judging by her dripping vulva, the girl was enjoying herself immensely

This one introduce Menyssan as Sardon walks toward her and well of course it's a pretty sexy view too ^^

 Illustration 4: 

-Without another word, she lowered her hand and placed Sardon on her swollen belly. As soon as her fingers let him go, the emperor lost his balance and fell onto his back, enveloped in soft, smooth skin. The girl then playfully moved her stomach in and out, making his tiny body jump up and down.

"Stop!! Enough!!" Yelled Sardon, with rapidly-diminishing dignity.

His puny protests were easily muffled by the loud gurgling noises coming from the giant stomach below.

It's the moment where Sardon finally start to lose his assurance and composure and I like the idea of a prey walking and trying to stand on a giant full belly in the middle of digestion X3

 Illustration 5:  

-Sardon stared down the length of the tongue towards the back of the mouth and gasped when he saw a man there, still fighting to not slip into the hungry darkness beneath him.

That's a scene I'd really like to draw. Just a simple, open-mouth swallow and Menyssan ready for more after that !

  Illustration 6:  

Menyssan slowly massaged her full belly. She had greatly enjoyed her little teasing of Sardon and was now concentrating on the tiny movements coming from deep inside her. 

More or less the closing picture. And who don't want to see a happy and (satiated?) Meny digesting her meal? X3

And for the 6 additionnal picture, it's up to you !  you can suggest here what you'd like to see or what you think would be nice to show.. At the end, depending on the results we might do a poll to decide ^^