Beings - All new comic (25 pages) but it doesnt feel done... (Patreon)

Super VIP patrons, I am ready for all your comments and critiques here.  I have a comic I just feel isnt done

Is it missing some more feats of strength?  Are the proportions of the muscles wrong?  I dont want to release it, nor abandon it, nor give up

Any help or comments welcome, thanks for your super support