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Girl puts on a stolen ring and transforms into a superhero

What do you think?  Overall not bad perhaps

Seems to be lacking something - emotion?

Write in the comments what you think - will think of some other things

Also, will do a Heidi poll to see who she has sex with

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Lollyn96

no effects? the costume feels to come out of nowhere, without no magical effect, the ring looks like nothing magical or fascinating that will make you remember "wow this is the super ring" or something like that, these are my opinions based on my Black Cat transformation I did it recently in my last Patreon comic and was my first transformation of that kind.

growgetter

really good feedback - the artist didnt offer any effects and I would have to get them 3rd party - I was going to put a "FLASH" effect in beween pages 2 and 3 but it seems after your comments, its critical to find someone who can do effects

Lollyn96

I can do effects and stuff you can try me out, I can give you a sample of my Black Cat transformation and that was a first time doing it so I'm still evolving, I only have 8 months Daz experience

theicemancameth

slower more detail is needed. we all know where shell end up, but the journey for her and us is key.