Chapter 3 Page 24 Not-Really-Final (Patreon)

As you can guess, I am not happy with how this page turned out; the first panel looks absolutely horrible. Color blotches/missing color in a bunch of places, hastily-placed pre-drawn trees,  and the houses themselves look like they are from a 3D program or something. X_X

2nd panel is much better, but I really wish that the area to the left was not a wall of red...

Lastly, the bottom-right panel needs to have something more than just solid-orange past the door.

I really hope that I can give you guys a much better page real soon. X_X