Chapter 1 Remake Page 29 FINAL (Patreon)

Afterwards, I'd like to get chapters 2 and 3 touched up, if possible (not full-fledged remakes, but fixing the unfinished-looking backgrounds and replacing any weird-looking stuff and making the pages look even better)!

But yeah, I wrote a bunch of stuff for Chapter 4, and I think you folks will like it! ;P