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Prelude 443 (Patreon)

Published:
2019-08-11 18:17:04
Imported:
2021-05

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This week's Prelude update!   https://www.dreamkeeperscomic.com/Prelude.php?pg=443  Sorry for the delay, setting up our replacement workstation complicated things a bit.  But the battle is won- full steam ahead.

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Garrett Simpson

They wouldn't be best friends without a "friendly" dispute here and there! Harmony is definitely the more justifiably cautious of the 2

Willysilver

The text in the last panel looks a bit off... Looks like they're both talking at once. I get it, I think. Page looks great. A little friendly confrontation.

Zor Underpaw
>>25668160

I think it's supposed to be overlapping dialogue. The "if I" is Harmony and the "you'll" is Vanth, the rest is both. I agree it doesn't read well and there were probably better ways to convey that

Willysilver
>>25668160

Thanks. That's what I figured. I tend to be a grammar cop at times...heh.

Daniel Oehm

Mothra vs Battra?

Shannon TJ

fight! fight! fight!