Jupiter Jet Issue 1 Page 4 - Script to Page Comparison (Patreon)

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PAGE 4 

PANEL 1

Cut to: The blimp. How it actually happened.

Medium of Jupiter Jet as she opens the door to panel right (remember, from page 1!), and wind RUSHES in!

1: CAPTION (JACKY): This is what actually happened.

2. SFX: FWOOSH!!

PANEL 2

Pull out to a wide. The same MOBSTER and his LUGER are knocked over by a gush of wind and FALL into the stacked wooden crates.

1. JUPITER JET: Sorry, mister!

PANEL 3

Close up on the sacks of money sliding out the blimp door.

SILENT PANEL

PANEL 4

Cut to: Jupiter Jet flies through the blimp from left to right, her hair blown back wildly. She flies out the opposite door and past the Mobster on the floor. Her arms are outstretched toward the falling sack of money that is off panel. The Mobster raises his fist at her. 

1. JUPITER JET: Excuse me!

2. MOBSTER: Hey! Come back here, you little thief!

3. JUPITER JET: No way, buddy boy! I’m never coming back here again!

PANEL 5

The blimp is now high above Jupiter Jet. She hugs the sacks of money with her arms and her legs. Dollar bills slip out of the top of the sack and blow past her face. She looks very worried, brow furrowed.

1. CAPTION (CHUCK): Well, Jacky, at least you caught them.