Jupiter Jet Issue 1 Page 2 - Behind the Scenes (Patreon)

For all of my patrons, I'm going to show you some nice behind the scenes of our the first issue of our comic, Jupiter Jet.
If you haven't read the full issue yet, go find it on Comixology here -- https://www.comixology.com/Jupiter-Jet-1/digital-comic/616456

Here is the our script for the finished page above. 

• PAGE 2

PANEL 1 

Cut to: INSIDE the blimp. Jupiter Jet stands triumphantly, hands on hips. The blimp’s hatch door is wide open. Wind is rushing into the blimp cockpit. 

1. JUPITER JET: Nefarious ne’erdowells will always come to justice when I’m around!

PANEL 2
Over the shoulder off Jupiter Jet to reveal the MOBSTER (standard middle-aged, 1940s era gangster with a suit and hat), he has a LUGER PISTOL pointed toward Jupiter Jet. To the back of the cockpit we can see a whole series of crates stacked up.

1. MOBSTER: How’d you get in here?

2. JUPITER JET: Golly, gee, Mister, that’s a pretty nifty toy!

3. MOBSTER: This ain’t no toy, pumpkin!

PANEL 3

Full body shot of Jupiter Jet. She smirks. She has a David & Goliath style leather SLING loaded with a KETCHUP AND MUSTARD COLORED MARBLE.

1. JUPITER JET: No? Well, this is!

PANEL 4

Close on: the Mobster’s hand. The marble has knocked the Luger out of his hand. They both go flying in opposite directions. The Mobster’s hand is open, his fingers spread wide.

1. SFX: PTANG!

2. MOBSTER: Ugh!

PANEL 5

Jupiter Jet with TWO BIG BAGS OF MONEY under her arms. She stands on the ledge of the door hatch facing outward. Wind whips in! She looks over her shoulder, winking at the Mobster.

The Mobster shakes his fist up at Jupiter Jet.

1. MOBSTER: Get back here! I won’t let you rob me!

2. JUPITER JET: Rob? That’s a naughty word! I never rob! I just, sort of, borrow a bit from those who can afford it!

-- Hope you enjoyed that look behind the scenes. Can anyone spot the reference to Robin Hood in the above pages?

Cheers

Jason