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The astral spaces belonging to the Asano clan were attached to Earth while also being separate, like an artificial limb. They operated by their own rules, especially regarding magic. Inside the cities that were the heart of each astral space, both physics and magic were stable, balanced and reliable. Beyond the towering walls, stability and reliability were harder to come by. The further one went from the walls, the stronger and less predictable things became.

Biomes could shift across very short distances, with muggy jungles giving way to bone-dry desert. The terrain could also diverge from Earth norms altogether, with bizarre and seemingly impossible conditions. Frozen labyrinths of ice wound through lakes that steamed with heat. Sky fields where gravity held no sway had clouds that shot out gusts of wind to ride from one cloud to the next.

Emi and a team of fellow clan members had just made their way through one of the most used training grounds for the clan’s bronze rankers. Before the arrival of Rufus, bronze-rankers hadn’t been considered trainees, but now only silver-rank was considered graduation from the training program. The clan had an increasing number of people reach that stage, but was yet to have any gold-rankers.

The training ground was a broad valley with ever-shifting landscape. It was constantly windswept, and every few hours, that wind carried a fog that blanketed the valley. When the fog passed, the terrain had undergone massive change. Winter might have shifted to summer, snow and barren trees turning to thick growth. It may have rendered the landscape alien altogether, with looming fungus instead of trees, or floating islands with waterfalls spilling from them.

The fog also left a fresh swathe of monsters with every passing. Bronze ranked and adapted to the terrain, their variety and regular replenishment made for ideal training. The trainees had started calling it the gauntlet valley, as they were expected to make their way from one end to the other.

At the far side of the valley was the sweet reward of a pleasant and relatively safe zone to rest in. It was a region of rolling hills, flowering meadows and pleasant breezes. The monsters were sparse and mostly iron-rank, with the occasional bronze-ranker amongst them.

Emi’s group made their way out of the valley looking and feeling bedraggled. They had though they were home free hours earlier, only to get caught in a late rush of fog. What it had left behind was a valley full of plant monsters, meaning no living thing could be trusted. The trees shot out hungry vines and even the grass underfoot would shoot razor blades without warning.

Bloody, dirty and tired, the group of bronze-rank trainees picked a hill with a good vantage and trudged up it. The leader, Lauren, assigned one member to keep watch while Emi set up an array of warning rituals. The rest collapsed happily into the soft, thick grass.

The group was a semi-random assemblage. Rufus was broadly against trainees forming permanent teams until they were silver rank. He felt that the different training conditions and real combat experience warranted a different approach from Pallimustus. The Asano clan lacked the numbers to let their trainees experience as wide an array of styles before settling into teams. There was the potential option of joint training exercises with other factions, but that remained politically tricky.

Emi walked around the hilltop, drawing magic diagrams that lingered in the air. She traced them out with a finger that left trails of pale blue light behind every swish and swirl of her hand. The boy assigned to be on watch followed her around. He was almost two years younger, his parents having let him face monsters from a younger age than Emi’s had.

“Will, you’re meant to be watching our surroundings, not me,” Emi pointed out. She didn’t pause or turn from her work as she chided him. Her words did not deter his attentions.

“So, uh, hey,” he said.

Emi paused just long enough to roll her eyes and sigh before resuming her work.

“You have a job, Will.”

“Your magic spells will catch anything sneaking up on us.”

“My ‘magic spells’ aren’t finished.”

“I’m sure it’s fine.”

“You shouldn’t be.”

Will let out an awkward laugh before trying a different tack.

“Are you still working on that Rubik’s cube thing?”

“It’s not a Rubik’s cube, Will. I’ve explained that before.”

“It looks like a Rubik’s cube.”

“And you look like you could muster up a basic level of competence. And yet, when put on watch, the only thing you watch is me. If you want to get my attention, Will, what I find attractive is intelligence and competence. Since one of those is clearly off the table, I suggest you work very hard on competence. You have a long way to go.”

Will’s expression turned to a scowl at the young woman who refused to even look at him.

“You don’t have to be such a—”

“That’s enough,” barked Lauren who crankily rose to her feet. She marched over to Will, giving him a scowl much fiercer than his own.

“Will, if you want to see what bitchy looks like, keep hitting on people instead of doing your damn job. You do realise we can all hear your inept attempts to sleaze on the princess, right?”

Will looked around, seeing the rest of the group looking at him from where they were laying out on the grass. He suddenly remembered that he was the only guy in the group.

“Yeah,” Lauren said, reading his expression. “You’re not going to get a lot of sympathy here. We all heard you bragging to your friends about ‘building a harem’ after the groups were assigned.”

“That was just a joke.”

“And we all found it hilarious. Now, try looking in a direction monsters might actually come from.”

Lauren moved to stand next to Emi as she worked, moving around the hill slowly as more circles were drawn out.

“Not worried that this is overkill?” Lauren asked.

“Better to have it than not,” Emi said, then lowered her voice. “Thank you.”

“It’s something you’ll have to get used to. Especially if that’s how you’re going to react. You’ll scare off the nice ones and only leave the creepers who want to crack the ice princess.”

“I don’t like being called that.”

“Well, tough. When your uncle comes back, the Princess of Earth is exactly what you’ll be.”

“Uncle Jason isn’t going to conquer the Earth.”

“You think that matters? Look at Instructor Remore. He makes every silver ranker we have look laughable. What about when he’s gold rank? Now, think about what happens when he ranks up and your uncle arrives with a dozen more just like him.”

***

Combat rituals were unusual on Pallimustus, and unheard of on Earth. Specialised essence abilities were required to make combat rituals viable at all, and they were famously unwieldy. Emi was literally the one person on Earth able to use them, courtesy of her extensive training recordings. Farrah had predicted Emi would get the right powers and made sure Clive provided plenty of support. As one of the rare combat ritual users, he was able to provide hours of useful instruction footage and piles of material to read.

Emi’s ritual circle shields were the most perfect expression of her efforts to use combat magic effectively. They were moderately strong on their own and she could move them around to shield herself or her team as needed. She used multiple ritual shields at once, each slightly different from the others.

The shields operated in the core principle to Emi’s entire power set: synergy. When put together in certain sequences, they gained additional effects. They might become stronger against specific attack forms or inflict different forms of retaliatory damage. The strongest configuration was also the simplest: putting the shields in a stack.

By stacking the shields, not only did an attack need to pass through them all, but each shield magnified the strength of the others. With a sweeping gesture of her arms, Emi sent all her ritual shields to interpose themselves between Lauren and the manticore. It was a silver-rank beast with a lion’s body and a scorpion’s tail. Emi moved her shields into place scant moments before the monster fired a spine from its tail.

Emi didn’t see the projectile. She only heard the gunshot crack as it broke the speed of sound. The stack of shields shattered like glass and Lauren was flung back, as if snatched by an invisible giant. She was hurled on a near flat trajectory before finally hitting the ground, skipping across it like a stone.

Emi only let herself stare for a moment before tearing her eyes away. The manticore was already moving, launching itself at Will. He used his strongest defensive ability, Bunker, and was shrouded in metal-reinforced stone. None of the group had been able to so much as scratch it in training, but the lion-like manticore was tearing through it like a dog digging up the backyard.

Emi was already using another ability. Consolidate Mana was a spell that collected unstable elements in the ambient mana, such as from a collection of broken rituals, and made it the power source for follow-up magic. Drawing in the power of her broken shields, she drew out the most powerful attack magic she could muster. It wasn’t fast, but she wasn’t being attacked and nothing else she had would even dent a silver-rank monster.

She drew one circle after another, all tightly packed together. Normally, this would make them interfere with one another and see them all collapse. Instead, they worked in harmony, resonating with one another to amplify the magic she fed into them. She kept going, past any level she had tried in the past. She created more ritual circles and fed them more power, generating a matrix that thrummed with magical energy.

As she continued to work, her skin started to burn from the power the matrix was throwing off. The ritual circles started to tremble, pushed to their limits and beyond. Only then did she finally release the power. Her Matrix Beam spell unleashed a torrent of magic wider than she was and too blindingly bright to look at.

When the light faded, Emi saw that the beam had an impact on the manticore. Much of its fur was gone and there were burnt patches of skin. The bunker next to it had also been partially melted, finally impacted by a bronze-rank ability. Despite being marred by the beam, the monster didn’t look substantially damaged. What it did look was angry as it turned on the source of its fresh injuries. It turned away from the bunker, accelerating in a few strides before springing at Emi.

She barely had time to react when she saw the manticore lunge at her. Her dodge was too slow and her shields were broken, even if she hadn’t sent them away. As the monster reached her in a blur of motion, she closed her eyes to wait for the end. Several lumps of flesh hit her at speed and she stumbled, falling to the ground.

She opened her eyes as more lumps of flesh fell into the grass around her. They were chunks of manticore, roughly cubed, with the sides seared like barbecued meat. The smell of the burnt flesh was acrid, invading her nostrils. This was not meat fit for consumption.

She stood up and looked around for Rufus. He was kneeling over Lauren in the distance, tipping a potion into the unconscious girl’s mouth. She rushed over to join them, seeing Lauren’s body glowing from within with red light. Rufus was slowly pulling out a savagely barbed spine from where it was lodged in her gut, her body healing around it.

“Rufus…”

“Instructor Remore,” he snarled with a savagery she’d never heard from him. “Today, Trainee Evans-Asano, you call me Instructor Remore.”

***

Riding back to the city in a conjured helicopter, Emi again glanced up at Lauren, sitting opposite. The girl was fully healed now, Rufus having used a potion he brought with him from the other world. It was not just high rank but high quality, beyond anything Earth alchemy had even come close to.

Lauren was staring in Emi’s direction, but clearly not seeing her, caught up in shell shock. Emi couldn’t see her own face, but guessed that she was just as pale. She was still trembling after a rollercoaster of emotions as the adrenaline wore off. She still had adrenaline as she wasn’t high enough rank to transmute her body into a more magical one. Even with diligent training, there was only so far she could go without advancing her rank or getting a head start, like being an outworlder.

After the team landed, they were sent off with their parents.  Each had insisted they were adults at one time or another, but today they were children again, in need of the comfort of home. Emi’s parents were no different, waiting anxiously at the helipad. Emi was half expecting an ‘I told you so’ from her mother. But all she saw was fear, and all she got was the fiercest, warmest hug of her life.

***

That night, Rufus stood over Emi as she sat on the couch in her lounge room. He loomed over her in a way he’d never done before.

“I know that Lauren was in charge,” he told her. “But we both know that you aren’t like the other trainees. That there are different rules for you. Not just who your family is, but who you are. You’ve got talent for days, with better training and more resources to hone it than anyone on this planet has ever enjoyed. Ever. Anything short of exceptional from you is inadequate, and you’ve lived up to that at every turn.”

He paced across the room and back, agitated. She knew he didn’t drink coffee, but he looked as jittery as someone who had just chugged two pots.

“You aren’t like the others,” he said again. “Like it or not, fair or not, you are different. Your uncle had to learn the responsibility that comes with that, and now you do as well.”

“Rufus—”

“This isn’t a conversation,” Rufus said. “We’ll have a lot of those, and I’ll be sympathetic to you then, but right now I am too damn angry. How many times have we warned you? You’ve heard about the dangers more than anyone. I don’t care whose idea it was to go further out than you were told. You are who you are. If you said no, and stuck to that, they would have listened, regardless of who had been assigned team leader. You know it and I know it. Whether it was your idea in the first place or you just let it happen, it was in your power to stop.”

He ran his hands along the side of his head.

“You aren’t the only one who will be getting this talk,” he continued. “I will be visiting every house of every member of that team and I will be explaining to every single one of them what colossal imbeciles they have been. What is the one rule I have hammered into you, more than any other? The first priority?”

“Stay safe,” Emi said hesitantly.

“STAY SAFE!” Rufus roared. “That is the thing I have never been able to cram into your uncle’s head. He always makes the sacrifice play, always goes for the victory. But he’s different too. Like you, the rules for him are different. The universe seems to bend over backwards to keep him alive, then brings him back when it doesn’t. Maybe you’re like him. Maybe you’ll always get out at the last minute, or find some way to come back from the dead. He always does. But it doesn’t work that way for the rest of us. We fight beside Jason, but when we get caught up in fights between gods, when we sacrifice…”

He wiped tears from his eyes and turned away. Emi sat in awkward, scared silence, unsure of what to do. Finally, Rufus moved to an armchair and sat, bent over with his head in his hands. When he spoke, his voice was soft and quiet.

“I once told your uncle, right after we met, that he had the chance to remake himself into the person he wanted to be. You’re a lot like him. Generous. Loyal. Self-centred, arrogant. Blind to how the thing that makes you special hurts the people around you who aren’t. He’s smart and you’re a lot smarter, but you’re both stupid in the same ways. So now I’ll tell you what I told him: now is the time for you to decide who you are going to be. You’re not going to be him, despite the similarities. I think you learned that today. Or remembered it, maybe.”

“Rufus, I—”

“Don’t. He moves before he thinks. If nothing else, be different from him in that. Stop. Consider. Things will be changing for you from now on. You’ll get a say in some of it, and some not. I’m banning all trainee excursions beyond the wall for now, so you’ll have time to think. To pursue other things.”

He let out a long sigh, finally looking up and right at her.

“Being special means that you have responsibilities, Emi. Like it or not, that’s just something you have to live with, and I know it’s not easy. Your uncle and I have both been damaged by it, and you’ve seen that.”

“With him. Not with you.”

Rufus nodded.

“I hold a position in my family a lot like you do in yours. I’ve never talked about that with you, and maybe that was a mistake. I know what it’s like to feel pressure. To watch my friends get hurt and realise I could have stopped it if I’d made better choices. When you get special treatment, everyone expects you to live up to that. To be the best. I’ve put that same pressure on you myself. But it’s okay to lose sometimes, even when you are the best. It’s okay to fall short sometimes. Even the best can always get better. I said you were arrogant, but you have nothing on me when I was your age.”

He stood up and gave her a weary smile.

“Some other time, ask me about my friend Kenneth and his duck essence. For now, spend some time with your family. You’re going to sleep like the dead tonight, trust me.”

He moved to the door and stopped, glancing back.

“There will be no monster hunting for a while,” he said, “but other opportunities are coming up. For you and some of the other trainees. We’ll talk about that soon.”

“Rufus?”

“Yes?”

“How is Lauren?”

“Physically, she’s fine. As for the rest, its too early to tell. She suffered a brutal attack that she could do nothing to stop. She could use a good friend who understands what happened to her.”

Emi nodded.

“You realise that you probably saved her life right?” Rufus asked. “Your shields couldn’t stop a silver-rank attack that powerful, but you mostly likely turned it from deadly to very nearly deadly. Good job, trainee.”

He slipped out the door and her parents came in from where they’d been shamelessly eavesdropping. They joined her on the couch, taking a side each and wrapping her in a collective hug.

“Your mother had to stop me from coming in,” Ian said. “I didn’t like the way he was talking to you.”

“That wasn’t a teacher-student talk,” Emi said. “That was a commanding-officer talk.”

“That’s why I didn’t like it.”


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Comments

Anonymous

Biscuits

Anonymous

"They had though they were home" probably should be thought

mhaj58

I really hope that when Clive meets Emi that it doesn’t get where it feels like. The jokes about sleeping with Clive’s wife are too precious to ruin like that.

Anonymous

BISCUITS!!!

Anonymous

i’m not really concerned about that. pretty convinced clive is aromantic or asexual at this point

Pablo Barbatto

Emi being Jason. At least good lesson to learn early on in your adventuring career

Anthony Moreno

I was kind of expecting the Astral space to bend and protect Emi but seeing Rufus talk to her like he did for Jason it brought a smile to me. A teacher teaching family.

JonO

"We fight beside Jason, but when we get caught up in fights between gods, when we sacrifice…” That shook me and i couldn't help but put my phone down and huff a bit. And then again a second time. Damn you shirt. Your writing is too damn good and passionate when it needs to be.

Anonymous

is it biscuits or biscuits? (first time posting) i would like the idea of Jasons Avatars being more involved in his zones on eath

Anonymous

I wish you arm chair editors would shut the fuck up. We get it.

Anonymous

Hey Trevor what value did your comment add, I thought this was feedback shirt wanted based on other posts,

Anonymous

My money is on the celestial book getting involved. No way he spends years with Jason and it never comes up.

Dimitri

I disagree - not too long ago he gave a speech on the requirements of a good long term relationship. This

Paul Boros

there is that Magic Society woman who aided his escape... Clive is a Still Waters run deep kind of guy

Anonymous

I came, I saw, I had biscuits

Connor

Little do they know that Jason won't just be Gold when he comes back to Earth. He'll be the only transcendent being in that whole Universe. So I think it's safe to say he'll basically own Earth by default.

Ashton Sower

I'm confused, are you saying you're worried they'd become a couple or something? If so, I don't think Shirt would write something disgusting like that so I think you can feel at ease

JonO

It sounds like emi is now bronze. I think it took Jason less than a year. Assuming emi did not eagerly face danger aside from today.... maybe another year? 6 to 7 now? I still think it should be closer to 8 but after checking I've had to fix that lol Will she be silver by the time Jason returns?

Dylan Alexander

Well he still technically has to reach diamond first to be considered a true transcendent.

Laura H

After breaking Rufus's rules and nearly killing the team leader, Emi is lucky Rufus was so nice when he talked to her! What Emi doesn't realize, or at least admit to herself, is that if she gets killed, Jason's reaction will NOT be pretty, and Rufus may pay a heavy price. And I want to hear the Kenneth and his duck essence story from Rufus's point of view!

Anonymous

Ahhhh that’s the good stuff. Love this one

Connor

Well, yes, he’d by definition be a half-transcendent like Dawn. However there’s a crucial difference. Dawn and her kind have reached the power limit of Diamond to touch the power level of transcendents. However Jason is achieving the other part of transcendence, the immortality and more spiritual parts, while he doesn’t yet have the power of a transcendent. So he should functionally be transcendent in every way except for raw power.

Joanna

Okay, THIS is the chapter we needed about Emi's development. So much more impactful than the multiple previous ones of people repetitively arguing about her without her even being present. Sure we need some of that for context, but I think a lot of it could be cut or condensed and the whole would be far better for it. Sorry to be critical, Shirt, but I feel the need to speak this time

Anonymous

Man good chapter I love how her style of fighting is so protective. RUFUS!!good talk bud she needed that. I think he's family running a school is rubbing off on him lol.

Tim

I think it was pretty clear the the only thing she did was, at the least, not object to breaking the rules, that doesnt mean SHE nearly killed the team leader...she saved her life...and Im pretty sure Jason wouldnt punish Rufus for being unable to save his niece from herself. That would make him more than a hypocrite and completely rewrite the entirety of his character progression....though I do agree about the duck story. Those are some of my favorite side stories lmao.

Jordan Rogers

My guess is the silver monster showing up is a sign Jason’s power is nearing gold, so all his territory is going to gain aswell

Zachary Blevins

See, that was a good chapter The last three about her habit been

Anonymous

I want Jason to get an updated certificate from the Church of Death. "..... has died 4989 times, so far....." And then find a reason to give it to Leara..

Anonymous

She’s growing so fast

Russell Widger

I see a mentor/student relationship between Clive and Emi, there isn't a whiff of romance that I can smell here

Laura H

But if Emi pushed the group to go beyond the limits Ruufus had laid out, it was her fault that Lauren nearly died. And we got a strong impression that Emi is arrogant enough to do exactly that. That was my point.

BloodStorm

I can’t wait for Jason and the team to all hit gold and head to earth. Also I hope Colin and Gordon can be more active in Jason’s zones on earth after he hits Gold and becomes an Astral King. Even when he’s not on earth

Alexander Dupree

“It’s something you’ll have to get used to. Especially if that’s how you’re going to react...” I appreciate that this is not necessarily Travis’s opinion. Still I’d like to directly refute that she was in any way responsible for that guy being a piece of shit. She was clear and direct with her response and she be commended for speaking the truth.

Anonymous

I can't help but think about Jason's adventure society assessment, when Jason and Humphrey and a whole bunch of fresh young adventurers were given a question about possibly going after trap weavers at dusk in their assessment. And Jason and Humphrey had pretty much figured out that what was being looked for wasn't powers or combat abilities, it was the wisdom to not try to beat the odds. To acknowledge when something is too hard or dangerous and to not make the stupid choice. Today Emi failed that test. It wasn't givin in a controlled environment with an invigilator. It was a bunch of iron rank idiots who talked themselves into nearly getting themselves killed. This was an adventure society failure situation which is extra sad because Emi has been trained by Rufus. And Rufus's family runs a school.

Anonymous

The monsters seem to get more dangerous the further you go,

Anonymous

"They had though they were home free hours earlier, only to get caught in a late rush of fog." *Thought not 'though', missed a letter

Anonymous

Great chapter! If you ever want to do a side book I would love a story about Emi as she goes through iron rank

Sebastian Prue

It's nice to see Rufus's personality here. Fiercely protective and someone who wants the best for everyone. He more than anyone else knows the position emi is in, and I'm glad he knows it

Morgan Amacosmos

I think that it's still a fair statement to say that you have to get used to crappy people reacting crappily when you choose to handle them indelicately. Emi isn't in the wrong at all, but she's also making choices that fair or not, *will* lead to confrontations. Maybe a less socially loaded parallel would be someone volunteering to pick up trash. Not a judgement of the person, but they will need to become accustomed to the smell of trash if that's something they wish to continue doing.

P K

Yeah, I think it's kinda refreshing though to see such blanet one sided interest get called out though, it's such an awkward feeling not only see but be on the receiving end. I like how everyone called him out on it though.

P K

Thats a good point, idk if intend but feels like it is. Hopefully that means more Jason soon, though I really like anything from this dude at this point

Jordan Jones

These chapters lately are gold. I always look forward to new chapters, but Shirt is on a tear with these.

Jordan Rogers

I wish they were gold they’ve been more late silver, I need some stat info on a gold ranker for comparisons sake

Anonymous

Where were the other team members during the fight?

Anonymous

Naw mate. Ashton is just anti biscuit and believes Shirt won’t write about something “disgusting” like a couple of buscuits. Maybe they’re more of a croissant person?

WindGunner

This is funny to me because another author makes the same mistake just the other way around all the time

Anonymous

Pretty sure you're underselling it by quite a lot. That's only like 5 deaths a day over 2ish years. Needs to be closer to 10 deaths a day

Anonymous

So is EMI Bronze rank now? Guess this is a new young Lauren and not the one from the Network

Alex Schellenberg

For Rufus to casually kill a silver rank monster like that must mean he is closing in on Gold rank. Imagine how handsome he will be!

Connor

Do we know there’s Astral Kings on earth? I know there’s messengers there so that does make sense. Just didn’t think Earth could support a full transcendent since it can’t support the existence of gods. Even Dawn in her true form would break the universe.

JonO

The third paragraph is what led me to believe bronze. I could be wrong, but i don't think foolish irons would venture into silver territory.

JonO

From what i saw the aks aren't in earth. Boris was traded by his and stayed at gold by consolidating his power into being an even stronger gold. But Jason freed him so boris can now be his own king if he chooses.

JonO

Rufus acknowledged that wasn't the case or likely wasn't. The likelier case is that they felt strong because they had the princess and wanted to test their might. Emi simply didn't counter it when not only did she know better, could've been better and avoided the fallout

JonO

He will be the bobo bo bobo of bo bobo bos! But more attractive for sure.... have you seen that guy.... he has afro chest hair and uses them as fists lol i need to watch that show again lol

Kevin Anderson

I wondered the same. Totally assumed Jason's instincts kicked in. Might have if Rufus wasn't around.

Kevin Anderson

I imagine an AK could be on earth yes. Maybe even multiple. But to be clear, only their avatars. And their avatars probably still need to be down ranked similar to dawn's. Remember the comment a while back about AK needing to negotiate with a planets gods to send their avatars to a planet. With earth , the unorthodoxy AK would not need to do that. So yeah, I bet there might be more than a few that have their avatars there.

Kevin Anderson

I'm pretty sure you are right. It was heavily implied, if not stated outright. An iron ranker would not have even slowed down a silver. They wouldn't have seen it coming even. This also to me implies she's a good amount along the bronze path as well.

Kalanaere

The point wasn't that she's responsible for his actions but she is partially responsible for the comeback he was about to give. Like Jason she could not just say no or give a polite refusal, instead she got sparky and that is going to almost always invite a similar response.

Kalanaere

Jason first needs to anchor a bridge as it wasn't done to.our knowledge

Kalanaere

It's more about the rising levels of magic on Earth. The further towards the edges of Jason's Domains you get or even the closer to the Astral Space you get the higher the magic and thus the higher the power of creature

Kalanaere

It was never said she pushed. Only that she Wasn't objecting either

Kevin Anderson

You are correct, but Lauren? Seemed to be also speaking of past patterns and similar situations. ( She pointed out that this is why the nice guys stopped approaching her). I saw it more as a general "personal life" coaching moment rather than a specific comment on just this instance. Sometimes, over time, people inadvertently put themselves into the negative situations in a way based on past actions. I do think emi was fairly patient and to Rufus point she should have put a more forcful stop to it than she even did. And fk that dude.... What a turd.

Kalanaere

It states in the beginning that they're Bronze. As for being Silver, it really depends on how far into Bronze she us vs how far Jason is into his fight

Kalanaere

Jason will be Hslf Transcendent as he's has to Max out Diamond first to be a full blown Transcendent. Dawn on the other hand is already at thar peak. She just needs to become a God or a AK to fulfill the role. To our understanding Borjs is likely the strongest person on earth excluding Velsivius whose only using an avatar since he's peak diamond as well as 1st Prime of The Reaper. Earth can't handle a Diamond ranked yet which I'd probably a good thing

Kevin Anderson

Yep. His time manipulation just turned that thing into minced meat.... And they didn't even see it coming, unlike the monster....

Kalanaere

You do realize that Shirt has asked for these reports right? Either here or on the Discord thread. This is why you have Beta and Gamma readers to help catch these little things, hopefully before printing

Kalanaere

Did Lauren really call Jason The Prince if Earth? Seriously does she know nothing of our beloved Starlight Rider? There is no way in hell he's settling for "Prince" when he's a "King" lol

Anonymous

Wait, “Rufus’s family runs a school”? When did this happen?

Obi-Wan-Sage

OMG love this storyline. back to basics again. love it. Emi going thru it. Glad to see you didn't just glanced over it. But its also part of growing up testing your boundaries being stupid. She's got to see and feel what happens when your decisions are poor. Its all part of maturing. And how grown-ups sweat bullets hoping their own kids mistakes are not deadly. Parents never like when their kids get a talk down, but its necessary, it builds character. Part of life. Awesome writing as always!!!

Tim

Yes, youre right about her arrogance. I was just pointing out that it wasnt stated that SHE made the choice to push. I imagine it was likely a group decision, they were feeling strong, and over extended feeling cocky, like JonO pointed out. She deserved the harsh lesson, whether she pushed or not though. So while I like Ian, he needs to get over it...when he's out in the field watching people make life and death decisions first hand, THEN he can complain about how a commanding officer reprimands his juniors.

Anonymous

Isn’t Kenneth the guy who led team biscuit for a while. I remember him and gary laughing about the time he beat Rufus.

Anonymous

Yes, when they assaulted the Purity Dam when the messengers were summoned

Kevin Anderson

I'm sure shirt wouldn't write them together any time soon. But ffs people, on the scale of hundreds of thousands of years life spans.... 20 year difference once she's an established adult is not a big deal. Once she's silver or gold? Wgaf.

Gilgamiso

I actually teared up when I realized Rufus was referring to Gary's sacrifice, I am loving these chapters so much

Gilgamiso

I must've reread that part like 3 times, it really had a lot of emotion

Paul Birchenough

Whoa, just had a thought. If the team name is 'Team Biscuit' does that mean that individual members should be refered to as 'crumbs'? Ooooooo... and to torture a joke even further... Does Clive's wife only sleep with other people because she doesn't like crumbs in her bed? Sometimes I love my 3am brain.

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It has nothing to do with some abstract ideal of responsibility. It has to do with the cause-effect nature of human social interaction. Like it or not, woulda-shoulda-coulda to your heart’s content; the cold, hard truth of reality is that humans respond to their own interpretation of other people’s action, appearance, etc… Their own interpretation, with their own biases, wants, needs and fantasies ascribed and imbued. This is easily observed and predicted. Ergo, the recognition of that fact and the modification of one’s own behavior to achieve a desired, tangible end — instead of harping on some abstraction of a convoluted and contentious moral point — is the intelligent play. To wit: if you have the knowledge and ability to change your situation despite being powerless to change the world around you, you can take responsibility to use how the world works to your advantage. TL;DR — guilt only really matters in law and politics, and then only if enough people care enough to gripe about it. Even the philosopher’s can’t agree.

Youkai-sama

I think his dislike is the change in tone of the relationship. COs are willing to order niggas to go get killed for the good of the ninmu; instructors usually avoid doing that.

Sean C Jackson

Well they are teenagers, so I blame any sleepy behavior on his parents. But yeah she was perfectly justified in telling him off for not doing his assigned job

Sean C Jackson

Well from what we heard there was no indication that Emi is was even Emi's idea, the only thing Rufus said was that she has enough influence that if she said no the others would have listened to her.

Sean C Jackson

It's been ~3 ish years since she got her essences and around a year since she would've started fighting monsters so there'd be almost no chance she'd still be Iron.

Kalanaere

They need Jason to comeback and help Rufus train. Well okay Rufus will train because Jason's idea of training would be to give them a Bronze or low Silv avatar and hauling off on them without killing

Sean C Jackson

Sure but he's already completed the hardest part of becoming a Transcendent, he's completely immortal beyond even the power of GABs to destroy and will be able to call on at least a little of his Transcendent power making him the closest thing to a Diamond ranker to have ever set foot on Earth.

DivineNapier

Chapter after chapter through all the joy it mostly brings I can't help but wonder if it will all just come down to Jason the patron Saint of sacrifice becoming powerful enough to sanction himself to prevent or rebirth something Ludacris 3 books from now, eh well maybe it's just me p.s thanks shirt you ruined my life can't stop chasing this lit rpg dragon now

Anonymous

yes i agree with this - i'm hoping in the actual book the info about emi gets condensed, and hoping they stay as a minor side character - personally to me she's extremely irritating to read about - though looking at other comments i guess i'm on the minor side of that thought

Owen Kaz

Pretty sure it was done when the astral space closed. Boris and the messengers rode the wave it formed back to Earth like Jason and Farah did to get off Earth

Anonymous

She just called Emi a princess, which is what a Kings niece would be. It sounded to me like she considered Jason King of Earth

Anonymous

The point Lauren was making was that Emi is a public figure. "Rules" are different for public figures. Your interaction with "creeper A" will colour ALL your future interactions with people.

Anonymous

Yeah, I feel like he's properly healing now, in his own way. Loving it

Joanna

No, the bridge isn’t finished yet. Boris knows way more about astral travel and was able to lead the other messengers back, probably using the link that has always existed as a guide

Kevin Anderson

And with that "gauntlet", she should be able to tear through bronze fairly quickly if she wants to. If her family lets her....

Joanna

Yeah, when they’ve been the same rank for at least a few years I’d be willing to be okay with it. Of course that means Emi needs to get to gold, so there’s plenty of time to wait

Kevin Anderson

A commanding officer talk. Did Jason warn Rufus what noreth and dawn thought earth needed to prepare for? Is he preparing to take up the mantle of Earth general?

Anonymous

I'm really looking forward to Team Biscuit going to Earth as gold rankers... I know they won't, but she's right. They could actually rule the world. Once the bridge is complete, it's going to be wild when travel between worlds is possible.

Anonymous

Andre, it has been said before he doesn't mind and appreciates them as Kalanaere said. He often updates the chapter with corrections like this. Trevor is just being an asshole.

Anonymous

In the cards? It's nearly a guarantee considering the hardon he has for self sacrifice XD but that's why we love Jason!

N8rtotPlayz

Interesting chapter. This is clearly a decent time skip from the last one. Emi seems to be growing in ability. She doesn’t seem to be good with people or good at people like Jason. tyftc

Daniel is ŁØNE

It is implied that Emi didn't push for them to go beyond the slated boundaries Rufus had given, what he was mad about was the fact that despite knowing better Emi decided not to object to that action when she could. If anything the only reason Lauren is alive is because Emi is skilled enough to prevent the attack from being immediately Lethal. The crime here wasn't action but instead, inaction, if she had put her foot down and said No they would have followed because of her position but she didn't. Also, if you are following any of Jason's character progression you would realize that while Jason may be immensely saddened and maybe even angry by Emi's death there is no way he would lash out at Rufus for not saving Emi from herself without reverting a good chunk of his character development. And to be very honest this type of thing was bound to happen eventually, the pressure from her position as well as the constant negative response from her mother (yikes parenting lmao) was bound to push Emi into doing something stupid to rebel, if anything we should be glad enough that Emi had enough sense to not encourage the stupidity and was at least taking it seriously enough to save the other members from their collective stupidity, unfortunately, she didn't have enough to outright oppose the foolish decision.

crazyshadowfax23

Thanks for the chapter 🙏 I was wondering if Jason is fighting in his soul, and the soul forge is connected to Jason so strong, that the wood clone can assist Jason in his defence of the soul. Like giving Jason perfect shadowy forest conditions, or vines or brush, thorns can impede monster or somethin? Just a thought 😂

Jay Doubleyou Kay

Yeah I don't care how good Rufus is, or anyone else is for that matter, when Jason is done fighting the World Phoenix, his skills will quite literally be better than anything or anyone in the entire cosmos, across any universe. And then to sit on the Throne of all the cosmos... Yeah he'll give it up, but we all know he's going to get something RIDICULOUS out of it even if he's not trying to.

Jay Doubleyou Kay

I would bet my left pinky toe that Jason comes out of it at the very least gold, if not just jumping straight up to diamond. Most likely gold though. BUT, when he came back to earth, he wouldn't even need dozens of people with him to be able to rule Earth, he will be able to easily do it on his own. Not that I think he will, but with the skills and power he will have after his sundered throne battle, pshhhhhh. Wouldn't even be a fight.

Douglas Davis

Hey Trevor, no one cares what you think. Shirtaloon has asked for feedback and for us to point out missed mistakes. So sod off.

Douglas Davis

I have to say that Ian's reaction at the end of the chapter felt off. As a father of two girls myself, there is no way I would have been trying to stop Rufus' lecture, it is far more likely that I would have been the one giving the lecture. I have tried to teach my daughters the importance of always considering consequences, to their actions or decisions, more than anything else.

BloodStorm

Yeah I’m looking forward to that as well. If that doesn’t happen I will feel cheated

Leaored

Parents act in ways that bring bad consequences to the children all the time such as going to school fight a teacher because of a bad grade despite the fact the kid didn't study or not leeting they do anything by themselves but when they 18 years old expect the now young adults already know everything they need to suceed in life. Rationally Ian knows that Rufus' lecture is right but emotionally he dislikes anyone screaming at his daughter even if it is necessary, it is actually a very father like reaction to their daughter.

Darthnarciss

I think it's literally becuase it was the speech of a commanding officer, meaning military. Ian doesn't want his daughter to be in the military, he wants his daughter to be strong enough to take care of herself, but the speech being given to her is one that brings to mind the military, all the crap they've dealt with in regards to militaries, as well as the standard disconnect of a Military mindset vs a civilian one. Many parents, whether they are military or not, don't want their children in that life.

Crystal Donak

Agreed. Jason is going to rule Earth with his 12 Disciples. (Okay I added the disciples part...lol but she did say and bring 12 more like Rufus) ..I think Jason has bigger fish to fry the. EARTH but she doesn't know that lol

Crystal Donak

It's weird when I read the chapter I feel like there was a paragraph missing...like where was the discussion to keep going instead of Turing around? Like they got stuck there by accident because of the weird conditions? Or because they decided to keep at it? Were they stupid or just resting? The conditions are different then on Pallie.

Kalanaere

King Jason and his 12 deciples: 1. Rufus 2. Farrah 3. Humphrey 4. Neil 5. Clive 6. Sophi 7. Belinda 8. Taika 9. Boris 10. Travis 11. Dawn 12. Nik

Crystal Donak

Lauren was giving Emi a woman to woman coaching (well teen to teen) guidance session. Emi is a political figure and even though as women we shouldn't have to say go away to unwanted advances more them once..Emi is still going to have to learn how to deal with it. It's it the reality of her situation. And the more delicately she can appreciate others feelings. (Even if he is a creep) the easier her life will be.

Crystal Donak

What I love about these chapters...is the debate and interesting discussions that has come up!!! They are FIRE!!!

Tri Blankly

"They had though they were home free hours earlier" should the 'free' be 'three' instead? Also, ty for the chapter!! I enjoyed seeing the way EMI fights, and actual character growth from her, rather than her mom talk about her without her being there!!

Alex Schellenberg

I'm predicting a series of chapters that is all the new character sheets.

BloodStorm

So is this it or will there be a chapter one Friday?

Douglas Davis

Leaored, again I am a father and completely disagree. The most important role of a parent is to teach their child proper behavior in a civil society, a large part of that is getting them to understand the consequences of their decisions and actions.

Douglas Davis

No it shouldnt. "Home free" is a very common English idiom and is even included in the Cambridge dictionary.

Anonymous

The spelling error was: "They had thought they were home free hours earlier..."

Tri Blankly

Ah, my dyslexic ass thought it should be read as something like “They thought they would have been home three hours earlier” my bad lol

Anonymous

Would be nice got get those all at once for at least team biscuit because we already have details for 90% of their abilities through silver, so it would be a rehash + new effects at gold.

Grayvisc

He is literally training with and against cosmic beings of infinite power. So yeah, he’s gonna be badass when he’s done. I just wonder how he’ll stack up to Boris. The dude’s also had 1000s upon 1000s of years to hone his skills.

Godzilla511

Happens when you grow up sheltered an elevated. Just look at interviews with Prince Harry. Dude is awkward af. Emi is fine by comparison.

Godzilla511

He's also gonna be 100 shades of mentally fucked up from a decade of unceasing combat. It'll be like the beginning of book 4 x10.

Oliver

Do we? We even lack whole abilities of members of Team Biscuit.

Jay Doubleyou Kay

Grayvisc, right? I would be interested to see that as well, but also want to see his sword skills training with Japanese ex clan patriarch sword master as well as roofus' dad, who I think runs a school or something?

Jay Doubleyou Kay

Godzilla, yeah he's gonna be... Bad. He said it's similar to getting his soul scoured like the builder did and that was ROUGH. And that time was for like an afternoon or half day or something? This is going to be what? A decade? Jason's soul strength is going to be outrageous. Hopefully with that much power he doesn't dive too far into his darkness. Could you imagine if he gets back only to learn that Erica and Emi had been killed like a week before in the vampire war, or even worse, by one of the countries?

Kconraw

Thx for the chapter

Daniel Clark

Soooo....Emi and Clive...

Chris B

If you're implying there should be any sort of romantic pairing there, I really hope you're not. There would be close go a 20 year difference in age in them. Even with magic, that's gross. Not the mention the VAST power dynamic as Clive will be gold to Emi's likely bronze if/when they meet.