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Dawn’s dimensional vehicle, a garden cottage inside an orb, approached Jason’s cloud building. Standing at the edge of the garden, Dawn looked at the building that was now an architectural chimera of fluffy white cloud house and stark, black temple. Despite being unable to extend her senses into the building and check on Jason, she had stayed away since warning his friends. She had gone further than she intended with them, fearing she had left enough pieces for them to turn suspicion into certainty. That could spell disaster for Jason when the time came.

As for the reason Dawn had become involved in affairs in the first place, things were going well. Jason had done something insane and almost gotten himself killed, but that was inevitable. It was the reason she had bargained for a single chance to intervene, even if she then spent it protecting the Storm Kingdom instead.

From a strategic perspective, she would have been better off losing the battle to win the war, as the survival of Rimaros was not required for the World-Phoenix’s agenda to reach fruition. While she might be a servant of the World-Phoenix, however, she was still her own person, which was an independence the World-Phoenix valued in its servants. The World-Phoenix had selected Dawn to watch over Jason for this very reason; to help her to reconnect with her fading mortality.

Dawn was forced to admit that whatever forces he was involved with and powers he accrued, Jason was unrepentantly mortal. Immortality had led her to push aside the individual moments and the small pleasures. This strange man had grounded her, reminding her of how to live in the moment instead of looking only to the infinite distance. She had made impractical choices she never would have before, yet could not find it in herself to regret them.

Flying down from her dimensional vessel in the sky, Dawn alighted in front of the strange cloud building, on the grass between the building and the river. It had been largely churned to mud by the many feet that had surrounded the cloud house when events were at their most dramatic but, like Jason, the grass was slowly recovering. She walked towards the open arch leading inside, satisfied that her task for the World-Phoenix was almost done. Jason would ride out the rest of the monster surge in recovery, unable to give her any more outrageous surprises.

***

“What do you mean, you extra-absorbed them?” Dawn asked.

She was sitting in a simple, firm cloud construct chair while Jason was sprawled in a large, soft one that looked like a throne made of pudding.

“Well,” he said, looking sheepish. “You know how I absorbed the Builder’s magic door when I was only meant to use it, and then you used that as a basis for the magic bridge I was supposed to absorb?”

“Yes,” Dawn said, her voice heavy with suspicion.

“They were clanking around in my soul, doing their respective tasks, which is fine, I guess. But then, you know, stuff happened. And in the course of stuff happening, the two magic things kinds of got… broken down for parts.”

“Broken down for parts?”

“And looted.”

“Looted?”

“When you just keep repeating what I say in an increasingly angry tone, it makes me think that you’re angry.”

“Jason, what did you do?”

“That same thing I always do! I almost got killed, weird stuff happened and now I have to deal with it to save the world.”

“You’re saying that the bridge you need to build and the door you need to build it are gone.”

“Uh, yep.”

Dawn closed her eyes and rubbed her temples.

“I didn't think diamond-rankers could get headaches,” she muttered.

“I imagine it's psychosomatic, given the control essence users have over their autonomic…”

Jason trailed off as Dawn’s eyes opened to glare at him.

“Rhetorical question, fair enough,” he said.

Hunched over, looking down at the floor, she spoke quietly, her voice weary.

“Tell me exactly what happened,” she instructed. “Those objects both possessed vast amounts of power, along with other things that someone of your rank has no place knowing even exist.”

“Yeah, I kind of figured that out. Good news: I managed to loot an item from each that can probably help with building a magic bridge. I reckon the bunch of the stuff I’m not meant to know about went into those items instead of back into my soul. I figure they weren’t really meant to be there in the first place, so my soul spat them back out.”

“What items?”

“One is called a firmament bridge anchor. It sounds like exactly what we need. After all, the bridge is partly built already. What we need to do is anchor it on this side, right.”

Some of the tension left Dawn's shoulders.

“That's not what I would call good,” she said, “but it's not an unmitigated disaster. It complicates things, but it at least gives you a path forward. More importantly, it doesn't give you something you shouldn't have.”

Jason’s thoughts immediately drifted to the astral throne and astral gate residing in his spirit realm, still unexamined.

“What do you mean?” he asked lightly.

“I’m going to tell you something that is far above your position in the power hierarchy of reality, Jason, although it is something you have been hovering around the edge of for some time. You know that the great astral beings make deals with one another. They have done so over you.”

“Yep.”

“The key to this is authority. To the great astral beings, authority is a much more expansive concept than it is to you or even to me. It does have the usual definition as a right to exercise power, but to them, it is also power itself, and far more than that. To a great astral being, authority is not just the right to act but the strength to. It is a currency to be paid and bargained with; a resource to be consumed. It is who they are, what they are and what they do. A god embodies a singular conception and remains essentially unchanging so long as the concept doesn’t change. A god of the rivers will be altered if all the rivers dry up, but does not change as the waters pass into the sea. Compared to this, great astral beings are more transactional in their power, their areas of influence and even their very essence. They deal in pacts and bargains, with authority as coin of the realm.”

“I’m not entirely sure I follow.”

“Nor should you. If you claimed you did, you would either be a liar or simply wrong.”

“You’re saying the Dao that can be spoken is not the true Dao?”

“Something like that. I wouldn’t have expected religion from you.”

“Oh, I’m full of surprises, me.”

“Yes,” Dawn agreed in a disagreeable tone. “You are.”

She shook her head.

“The important thing you need to understand,” she continued, not letting him sidetrack her further, “is that the authority of great astral beings is not just what they have or what they use but what they are. Authority is their flesh and blood. Their DNA. Their souls.”

“They can trade their souls in chunks?”

“Yes.”

“Is that why the Builder keeps getting away with crap he really shouldn’t? He started off mortal instead of being made of this super authority, so the idea of pushing the boundaries of a deal or ignoring the authority of another isn’t so alien?”

“I cannot say for certain, but it seems likely. But that is not what is important.”

“You realise that the very concept of transactional authority essentially means corruption, right?”

“Be careful where you tread, Asano.”

“The artefacts,” Jason said, his voice rising half an octave in his rush to change the subject. “They had some of that authority in them, didn’t they?”

“Yes,” Dawn said. “And that was acceptable, even in your soul, so long as those artefacts were operating as intended. The door was never meant to be absorbed, but part of the deal to provide the bridge resolved that. Using the bridge would have eliminated the authority within the door and within itself once your task was complete.”

“And now the authority is in these items I’ve looted and the programming your boss and Builder put is gone? I basically reformatted the computers they built, stripped them down for parts and bunked off with all the RAM sticks? Now I’m running around loose with all the power of that authority, like a monkey with an assault rifle.”

“That monstrous chimera of an analogy is not entirely inaccurate. Somehow.”

“So, why aren’t there diamond-rank leg-breakers coming to take the super authority back?”

“Because the great astral beings don’t know what you’ve done yet. You have yet to leave your spirit domain.”

“They really can’t see in here, then. Good to know.”

“Show me the items,” Dawn told him. “If the authority they hold truly has been condensed from the artefacts, it’s likely it took the form of items because ungoverned authority held by you might kill you.”

“Might?”

“It may surprise you, Mr Asano, to learn that this is my first time seeing a silver-ranker running around with unattended chunks of great astral being power. I’m not entirely sure what will happen.”

“They aren’t going to tolerate me having any of their secret sauce though, are they?”

“No, Jason. They will not. It will be unacceptable to any of them, not just the World-Phoenix and the Builder. I suspect you may be safe from the World-Phoenix, however, if the item you looted from the bridge is what I think. We should start with you showing me these items.”

Jason invited Dawn to a party so he could display his inventory through the party interface power.

“Can you read the description?” Jason asked her of the Firmamental Bridge Anchor.

“No, but I know this item. As I hoped, it’s something you can use to establish the bridge, and doing so will consume the authority in the item. The great astral beings will have no qualms with you possessing it because it remains single-use by nature. Once the task you have is fulfilled, the authority will be spent and gone. There will be problems with using it, compared to the bridge you destroyed to get it, but we can look at those later.”

Jason pulled up the description of the other item, the fundamental realm authority token.

“This is a problem,” Dawn said immediately. “You can’t have this.”

“I kind of had a feeling.”

“You will need to give it back. You do have some leverage, however.”

“Oh?”

“The fact that you have this is a major demonstration of the Builder’s failure. Your inconsequential stature means that all the blame for any of his authority falling into your hands is entirely placed on him.”

“But they'll still shred me into my component particles for having it though, won't they?”

“Yes, which is why you need to give it back. But because the Builder is in an awkward position, you can ask for some concessions from him.”

Jason nodded.

“I’ll give it some thought,” he said. “The great astral beings will know I have this as soon as I take it outside, right?”

“Or when I go outside. The World-Phoenix will know because I know.”

“Fair enough, but let’s put a pin in that and swing back to the complications with establishing the bridge. While I’m glad I didn’t ruin the whole plan, surely I put a dent in it. Starting with the fact that even if I didn't give away this authority thing of the Builder's, I don't have a way back into the fundamental realm-space. I guess that's the first concession I ask for.”

“Yes. That is a problem with an easy solution, as you only need access once to establish the anchor. The larger problem is the bridge itself.”

“I have the magic thing. You just said I could keep it.”

“That can anchor the bridge, but you still need to complete its construction. The bridge items I gave you would allow to you do that task, but now you will need to find a way to construct it yourself.”

“Can’t you show me how to do that?”

“Jason, my grasp of astral magic is formidable, but you have taken an already intricate situation and made it considerably worse. It may surprise you to learn that my expertise does not extend to building a bridge between a pair of worlds illicitly modified from the creation of their respective universes and connected through a link that was then tampered with and left to grow unstable over the course of centuries until those modifications were mostly undone by someone who barely understands what he’s doing and then used the link as a basis to build half of an astral bridge he also doesn’t understand with a magical artefact he accidentally digested and now can’t use to finish the job.”

“So, ‘no,’ is what you’re saying.”

“That is correct, Jason,” she said, biting off each word like they were the heads of small animals. “I’m saying no.”

“Good thing you don't breathe or that would have been rough. Still, you have a plan, right? I mean, I could make a plan, but you've probably heard about my plans. It's usually a two-steps-forward-one-step-back scenario. And the last step is onto a landmine.”

“As always seems to be the case with you, Jason, you are both the problem and the solution.”

“Which is what's going on with my plans, which I personally think–”

“The messengers,” Dawn said, cutting him off.

“The messengers?”

“The messengers are the best practitioners of dimensional magic that I am aware of. I suspect that much of the magic that the Builder cult has been using comes from them, as part of whatever bargain brought them to this world.”

“And they have the magic I need?”

“Their strongest magic – the magic that allows them to stage invasions across dimensions – is predicated on the trait that makes them unique as a species,” Dawn explained. “Dimensional travel is exceedingly difficult. The reason the messengers can do it so well is that their gestalt bodies can endure dimensional forces that even others with astral affinities, like celestines, cannot. This means that they can afford to travel via dimensional magic that other species would not survive.”

“You’re saying that their knowledge of dimensional magic is high, but their dimensional magic is crude.”

“Crude?” Dawn asked. “We’re talking about dimensional magic that silver-rankers can use. That transport thousands of people between realities. You have no idea of the refinement required to perform that kind of magic with any less power than the magical equivalent of a sun.”

“Alright then,” Jason said. “They know their stuff. You think their theories will help be repair this bridge?”

“You should hope so,” Dawn said. “Otherwise, the World-Phoenix will be forced to take more forceful measures.”

“Meaning what?”

“Meaning that after what you accomplished on Earth, she can send people to fix this. If she does, however, it will not be with finesse. Imagine preventing a teacup from falling off a shelf by drilling a hole in it and bolting it to the wall.”

“I take it that Earth is the teacup?”

“Yes.”

“Your boss doesn’t have anyone with finesse?”

“She doesn't have anyone steeped in this from the beginning. Like it or not, Jason, your fingerprints are all over the half-completed astral bridge. It's such a mess now that anyone else will have to bulldoze what's there and build over the top.”

“Then how do I get these messengers to teach me their magic?”

“I have no idea. As far as I am aware, they won’t. Fortunately, this world is currently host to a great number of them.”

“Which is awfully convenient. If they weren’t around, you’d send me off on some other errand that would probably kill me, right?”

“Yes. But as they are here, you can ask them for access to their magic.”

“By which you mean ‘beat them up and take whatever magic theory they have so Clive and I can reverse engineer it,’” Jason said.

“See?” Dawn asked. “You’re on the right path already.”

“Oh, that’s terrific. Fighting some interdimensional threat in order to save the Earth because a bunch of transcendent beings have been messing with it. And of course, they refuse to help fix it because of their own nonsense rules or just being pricks in general. I can’t possibly imagine what that’ll be like.”

“Sarcasm doesn’t become you, Jason. You lack Neil’s bitter flair.”

Jason pushed himself out of the chair, reached for an object in his inventory and pulled it out. He snarled through the pain as he circulated his mana to do so until it appeared in his hand. A brown stone tablet, it had an image of a world engraved into it and no other features.

“Ow. I knew pulling stuff out of my inventory would sting to buggery.”

Jason started hobbling towards the door.

“Where are you going?” Dawn asked as she followed.

“To give this back,” he said. “You said I have to. Should give the people still watching this place a good show.”

“We should discuss what you’re going to ask for.”

“I know what I’m going to ask for.”

“I can help you–”

“No, you can't, Dawn. We both know that.”

He flashed her a bright smile.

“You've helped me too many times already. I know you've been pushing the boundaries of whatever deals you've been making.”

“So has the Builder.”

“But will your boss let you get away with what he does?”

“No,” she admitted.

“I have to deal with the Builder, Dawn. I have to handle the messengers and I have to save the world. Again. And that’s okay. Interdimensional heroics are kind of my thing.”

She let out an exasperated groan as she followed Jason’s slow progress down the main stairs of the temple.

“You'll have to leave your spirit domain for the great astral beings to sense that manifested authority you're holding. Be careful what you say outside of your domain because there will be many eavesdroppers.”

They reached the open arch that marked the edge of the cloud temple and Jason's spirit domain. Jason paused at the threshold.

“Okay,” he said. “So, I step out and wait for some Builder lackey to turn up and repo this thing?”

“Essentially, yes.”

“And we can’t discuss anything delicate outside of the spirit domain?”

“That’s right.”

“Good to know. By the way, I have an astral throne and astral gate now.”

Jason stepped out of his spirit domain.

“WHAT?”

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Comments

Alexander Dupree

Thanks for the chapter. I'm ready for my understanding to dawn.

mhaj58

I officially hate this story 😒🙃 but damn if it's not great

lockx

Oh my gods. That cliff is going to be hell

Anonymous

"WHAT?" about sums it up.

IWannaBeATiger

I'm calling Reader Protective Services

Tanner Lovelace

Now that's the way to start a month long break! Have a good month off, Shirt! We'll be here waiting with great anticipation!

Michael McMahon

Welcome to The Cliff. We will be camping here for the next 5 weeks in frustration and anticipation. Great chapter.

Apotheosis

HAH, perfect cliffhanger. I wish you a wonderful break shirt!

David Fletcher

I appreciate Jason’s lack of surprised or dramatic response to Dawn’s gloom and doom. If everything is a death sentence, nothing is going to feel like it after a while and you go a bit nuts. Thanks for the chapter and enjoy your break!

Aaron Schwartz

That’s interesting, I thought the majority of the conversation would be around the gate and the throne. I had almost forgotten about the realm token and the bridge anchor. It’s nice to know about the Token though. Although according to what Shade said in the last chapter it sounds like the gate and the throne will make building his half of the bridge considerably easier… he did describe the throne as a tool that he could use to build with his spirit realm.

Jon

What a chapter. Shame it leaves on a slight cliffhanger. But if I remember correctly this is the last chapter of 2021. Thanks for your hard work enjoy the vacation and see you in 2022!!!!

frankie doerr

I like how Jason dodge dawn with the astral throne comment in the end and shirt you are a terrible person I’m so glad we are getting one more chapter before your vacation we are getting one more right

Aaron Schwartz

And this is why I really hated the chapter about Dawn keeping things from him. She was very careful not to tell us but I’m fairly certain that whatever the hell she was warning his team about it’s now been massively overtaken by events. Remember Jason‘s pattern has two steps not just one. She you predicted that he would almost kill himself again and she was right. But the second step is that he always emerges from having almost killed himself having somehow miraculously attain power that he has no business wielding. That happened every single time. So I don’t know why she predicated her plans on the idea that he wouldn’t somehow break the bonds of what she assumed he was capable of

Ollie

Thank you Shirt, can’t remember last time I laughed that much. What an ending

Anonymous

Thanks for the chapter :)

Anonymous

That's what you get for jinxing yourself, Dawn.

Anonymous

My idea that he’s going to get a messenger familiar or avatar seems ever more likely

frankie doerr

He said today or Wednesday I reallllly hope it’s Wednesday but I don’t blame him if it’s not happy holidays shirt see you next year

Lictor Magnus

What a cliff to end on. See y’all in a month!

Jeff Taylor

Hahaha! Love how he tossed that in at the end!

Raymond Mouton

Great ending for the chapter. Enjoy your break. I feel like a Civilization misquote, “Just One more chapter…” I await the next chapter with great anticipation.

Fleetpanda

Ah the tease. After all that talk about... well, talking to Dawn about about the throne and gate, I should've known that they wouldn't talk about it whatsoever.

Pip Mitchell

“Jason had done something insane and almost gotten himself killed, but that was inevitable” lol

Anonymous

Or he falls in love with one. I feel like it would be ironic if he ended up with a literal angel. I feel like it’s one or the other.

Anonymous

Thanks for the chapter! Don’t know if today or tomorrow is the last chapter (obviously hoping for tomorrow) but you do what you think is best for you! Enjoy your break!

Mark Thorne

I genuinely lol'd at the way he trolled poor Dawn. She really is going to kick is ass when he hits diamond. All up and down the universe.

ReadingObsessed

Now there's an idea! In my head he tries to replicate their magic and grows wings for a moment or two, just to freak people out.

Matt Brind

Another fantastic chapter, thank you! Enjoy the break, you've very much earned it!

Anonymous

.... Okay, I know that Shirt is on break but this is a bit too much... Seriously, can't we get some closure?

Anonymous

She tries so hard. I almost feel bad for Dawn… almost. Great chapter!! Hope you enjoy your time off. Can’t wait to do it all over again next year!!!!

Anonymous

As this is the last chapter before your well deserved break. I mean this in the nicest possible way... FOR FUCK'S SAKE SHIRT! YOU ARE SUCH A SHIT!

Alan Fernando Elías Etcheverria

Really, Travis? I hope you don't take seriously my previous recomendation of dropping to 3 chapters weekly after that cliffhanger, which is darker than the Order of the Reaper Trials' portals

Aaron Schwartz

How similar do you think this concept of authority is going to wind up being to the way authority is portrayed in will Wights Cradle Series? It’s already shaping up to be quite similar but they do appear to be some differences when Dawn mentioned that the great astral beings traded their authority to each other she implied that they didn’t get it back. In the cradle series the only way for you to permanently lose access to your authority was for you to stop exemplifying the icon or die. That being said I am looking forward to flushing this out because it will almost certainly end up softening the magic system. I mean his powers will almost certainly still be based on his essences but I’m guessing the higher rank you get the less defined those original 20 abilities end up being until by diamond rank it’s closer to the traditional idea of magic. The direct manipulation of forces using one’s own will, Limited only by one’s creativity. I mean how else would something with the scope of an essence power be able to create the cloudships, even if it is a diamond rank one.

Jonathan Walker

I FUCKING KNEW YOU WOULD DO THIS. Every time you go on break you leave a huge ass cliff hanger but this is the worst one ever since you'll be gone for a month.

Anonymous

Haha Shirt, best ending ever, the readers tears having to wait a month beautiful.

John Curtis

uhh we have to wait a month but gonna be good

Leander

A) Goddamnit B) Called it

Anonymous

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! That it all I have to say to you Sir Shirt and not one more word about your abhorrent cliffs. great chapter though <3

Thomas Todd

I think it will be quite different, the authority is wholly the great astral beings, they aren't becoming reflections of a universal truth like Icons are in cradle. I think for example that the phoenix tokens probably use reaper authority obtained by the world phoenix to resurrect as that part of the token doesn't fit with what the phoenix can do. Reaper authority to resurrect and phoenix authority to transfer across dimensions to achieve its effect. The trade in authority is probably to allow them a way to act outside their scope

Sean McClain

I want him to just ask for a magic, jump to gold rank in a month item, as I am tired of rank limitations holding him back. Though I doubt he would ask for that

Anonymous

.... y u do dis?

James Squibb

A magnificent place to stop!

TerrestrialOverlord

Hear ye! hear ye!! Be it known that I have commissioned ninja cicadas to find SHIRT and sing beautiful tunes with increasing magnitude 1 step every single day in December. Enjoy your holidays SIR! you may increase the number of singers by throwing any coin denomination of your country unto any open soil.

Greymantle

So what's the explanation for why Jason didn't tell Dawn he had the Astral Throne and Astral Gate during their discussion of how to construct the bridge to earth? You'd think those might be relevant. Yes, Jason likes messing with people, Dawn included, but he wouldn't risk earth's survival just to do that.

DicedOnions

I think he's going to ask for Bob to leave Palamistis in the next 24 hours or something like he's holding part of a GAB's soul and it's the GAB's fault he's got it that is NOT a small favour he is owed

Thomas Todd

I imagine he was planning on mentioning it but he could see her getting angry and frustrated and didn't want to bring it up right away. When he got the opportunity to tell her but have a break in the conversation I imagine he took it

Anonymous

Honestly wish you took this week off also. I would have rather had the last weeks ending instead of this!

Zarik0

Kinda wanted he keep under wrap the token of authority and dont tell Dawn about this item, so he have something hidden to work on it that in the future (when he more powerfull and they cant anymore fuck him free) he can fuck/bargain/get in a good position for a pact with them and pay back the greats astral beings with what they do to him by messing with his life all the time, they really pricks Guess its kinda impossible/too risky to do it, to bad :( So like a guy say in a comment, one or multiple messenger as avatar/servitor for his realm (with Shade as the head butler :P) After he beat their arrogance for "their perfect lifeform they are" when he beat them and they realize Jason is more a Astral being to worship that them (he get more astral again with the last thing happening) they gonna bow to him at some point :), or some group of them want freedom and a new house out of the shit crusage and religious fanatism the other in their race are :) I wait when in the negociationg with the builder he gonna drop his (old real mortal) name he get in the item and the builder gonna grind his teeth so hard for this ;P, he dont asked Dawn on this xD

WyldFyr3 Damon

So wait, I think i figured out how the current Builder gained his power. We know he was mortal at one point. I think he pulled something similar to Jason and received some sort of token with the previous Builders Authority. He parleyed that into a new job. This leads me to think that what he got censured for was letting a mortal get a token with a larger chunk of his Authority than Jason currently has. A large enough chunk to say, give him the equivalent of majority shareholder control over the power kind of thing...

Anonymous

Awesome chapter and great cliffhanger! Have an awesome break Shirt!

Thomas Todd

Or the censure is the GAB stripping the original builder of his authority and then that would allow them to collectively grant it to someone else

Thomas Todd

He trusts Dawn, he has no idea what to do with the thing so keeping it has no upside for him especially considering I imagine he realises that it will draw attention to him which he doesn't want

Anonymous

Love it! Thanks Shirt!

Anonymous

I am kinda surprised that Greater Astral beings can't see into Jason's Spirit domain, this is the first limitation we have seen on them or on Dawn that isn't self imposed. Figured Jason was still so far below them that nothing he could do would affect them.

Logen Felxon

Thanks for the great chapter Shirt. We gotta learn to live on the cliff we've found ourself thrust onto, don't get too rowdy about the cliffhanger, it's not like your anger is going to change the cliff we live on. Can't wait to hear the rest of the conversation with Dawn though. :)

BloodStorm

Well at least we will finally find out about the throne and gate tomorrow even though I was hoping for today

Danielle Warvel

Lol, he knows how to stall a conversation. It’s his natural superpower

mhaj58

So HWMFM will be back Jan 5 for the western hemisphere.

Bryan

If I understand correctly the domain is basically an extension of his soul so they can't see inside because of the whole soul inviolability. And was it Dominion? in the crowd that said he couldn't even see the open area inside his domain. But, then again it also sounded like they would be able to tell he had the stuff in his storage space, which I thought was in his soul too, so I'm probably off base here

Algebrute

Nice. Thanks Shirt!.. Will we open '22 with "Builder, I've come to bargain!"? (Enjoy the break!)

Zpeed3

Nice place to take a break! Thanks for the chapter and have a great vacation!

Val the mysterious Jedi

I love when characters drop those bombs at the end, I can just imagine dawn losing her shit

Jeff McClure

Oh my god, Shirt. You are wonderfully devious man. That was a wonderful way to take a break.

Anonymous

Alright then,” Jason said. “They know their stuff. You think their theories will help be repair this bridge?” Be - *me

BloodStorm

I thought there was going to be one more chapter?

Robert Nugent

“Good to know. By the way, I have an astral throne and astral gate now.” Jason stepped out of his spirit domain.” And our boy just crossed the Rubicon. Shirt, See you next year you glorious bastard.

Anonymous

Thanks for the chapter! Rest well!

Anonymous

Really great chapter! I do have one question, at Diamond Rank*, wouldn't Dawn have a quick enough reflects to pull Jason back in before stepping outside? Even if she was in shock, she is still a Diamond Rank.

Torbjørn Nilsen

She knows she can't do or advise him on it in any way. So I think she really doesn't want to be able to talk to him. Thus why Jason did it the way he did. She knows about it, and can plan for it, but aren't going to be in debt to the builder for helping him to much.

Radzig

its 5pm, i open patreon. Then i remember. Oh. Right.

Melchisedec Bailey

.............................I need my fix..................

Anonymous

Making people ask "WHAT?" is kind of his thing

Omy Sadat

This feels evil! Happy Holidays

Lucas Gulick

Miss you shirt! Cant wait till January

Zpeed3

Netflix just re-released Nightrider 2000. Coincidence?

Radzig

Shirt gonna binge watch it 10 times in a row and we'll be blessed with more quotes.

wherebear

Just used the break to catch up on chapters. I was a few months behind and it was kind of intimidating to catch up while a new chapter came out every day so this reader is pretty grateful. Love where the story is right now. It is really refreshing to see that other characters are *actually* shouldering all the big stuff happening in these arcs and that Jason is getting a break. I mean, obviously I prefer Jason’s POV but it feels you’re really putting your money where your mouth is. We were told Jason wouldn’t need to be The Hero where he got back to Pallimustus and that actually happened. It’s also so cool that he’s actually pushing back when people ask him to do stupid/impossible things. Pretty inspiring, really.

Anonymous

The last part was so important, I was begging him in my head to please say no, and stand his ground on this issue. Amazing read. "LOOK AT WHAT I AM"

Zpeed3

Jumped back over the break a reread a bunch of chapters to get ready for the new content. This Dawn chapter made me think of a prior one where she talked about Astral beings be a hive mind type concept making use of their agents. The chapter that immediately followed had Shade, a Reaper aspect?, playing a major role. Now I’m wondering about the impact on their authority from all the time they’ve been forced to address all the Nightrider, Michael Dudikoff, Zardoz and Monkey with assault weapon backdrop. Then strangely, Netflix has a new episodes available banner on Nightrider. Is the Multiverse real and can we be saved?

Lucas Gulick

Rereading these last few chapters I cant help but think that Jason is going to be able to drain the messengers the same way he was supposed to drain the vampires. Presumably he will hit diamond the moment dawn returns and she will make the rest of the party leave him behind in some sort of dimensional rift he uses to form a legit dimensional vessel.

Anonymous

The long night is finally almost over.

Anonymous

Finally subbed and got to read through this chapter! Just dropping in to say that of all the Aussie sayings I've picked up from this series, "playing silly buggers" is absolutely my favorite. Though it seems like if I ever run into a proper Aussie, my habit of saying "G'day" may not be taken so well =\

Robert Nugent

Finished the audible version of book 4. Ready for new releases.

Robert Rosenthal

I know its not; the end but this would be a great ending for the story