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The Order of Redeeming Light had long travelled using underwater vehicles that were neither fast nor efficient but were very hard to detect. As such, they were able to avoid detection by the scouts watching the Builder island until they had almost arrived, their vessels surfacing shortly before beaching against the crumbling stonework shore. The vehicles looking like large, flat whales of green metal.

One of the vehicles pushed up against a point where the canted angle of the city had raised ground level several metres into the air. A massive hole smashed in the exterior had produced a rough ramp of rubble, the bottom of which the vehicle arrived at.

Only a few of the people from each boat were members of the order. Their purpose was to lead the rest, which the order was calling pure servitors. Once essence users from various fortress towns, they had been implanted with purified cores - voluntarily or otherwise – and were now obedient servants of the order.

The three order members vessel emerged one after another, leaving the servitors behind for the moment. Their silver-rank reflexes, balance and coordination meaning the rubble incline was no challenge to them.

“This entire operation is reckless,” said Fila, who was in the middle of the three. “There are gold rankers here. Stealth specialists, no less. They could be anywhere.”

“Then maybe shut up before they hear you complaining,” said Ramona, bringing up the rear.

“Both of you be quiet,” Sendira ordered from the front. “Distraction and frivolity taint pure dedication of purpose.”

Sendira was not just the overall commander of the island raid but also the second-in-command of all the order’s forces in the Sea of Storms. Sendira did not deign to turn to look back while delivering her admonishment as the other two shared a glance. All three were from different cells of the order but the pair had found a swift camaraderie working under Sendira.

The Order of the Redeeming Light had operated using a cellular organisation long before the church of Purity fell. As one of the church’s most extreme wings, they had always been prepared to face religious persecution. It had served them well following the downfall of the church. As a result, the order’s operations in the Sea of Storms had an overall command structure but each cell had its own leadership.

Melody Jain was the overall leader of the order’s local operations, along with her second, Sendira, and church advisor, Laront. As the overall leadership was the same silver rank as the individual cell leaders, there was a constant tension between them.

“You think we don’t know why we were assigned with you specifically?” Ramona said to Sendira. “You don’t want us interfering with your real objective.”

“You might be telling us we’re here for the clockwork kings,” Fila added, “but we know that is just an afterthought. You only found out about the clockworks kings while setting up to kidnap Melody’s daughter. Melody is using the presence of the kings as a pretence to expend the order’s resources for her own ends.”

“You picked us for your group because you don't want our commanders realising that Melody is using the order for herself instead of its true purpose," Ramona said. “While you’re keeping an eye on us, Melody’s blind little devotees can do the things she doesn’t want us to see.”

“Only Purity is worthy of our devotion, not his servants,” Sendira told them. “We are all unworthy, seeking to cleanse the taint that lingers within us and keep ourselves from any more. To speak in ignorance and disobedience, both of which make you lesser, is to invite uncleanliness of spirit into yourself. Your only concern here should be purity of purpose. Do as you are told and you shall lift yourselves in the eyes of the god.”

“You talk down to us like a gold-ranker, Sendira, but you’re not,” Ramona said. “You’re just someone who takes being holier-than-thou a little too literally.”

The wing of the Order of Redeeming Light in the Sea of Storms didn’t have any gold-rankers amongst them. The primary reason was that they didn’t want to draw the kind of attention that gold-rankers inevitably brought. Even the most mundane of gold-rankers was the kind of potential threat to stability that people liked to keep track of, especially if those gold-rankers were operating outside of the Adventure Society.

It made sense, then, for the order to avoid having gold-rankers in their number when the goal was to operate without grabbing attention. Long before the fall of the Purity church, the Storm Kingdom had been aware of the Order of Redeeming Light’s presence. Even with legitimate churches, their more extreme factions were worth paying attention to, but the local powers had remained unconcerned so long as the order had no one higher than silver rank. When local authorities came looking for them, the order’s losses were minimal as their discretion allowed them to enact preparations made while they had gone long-overlooked. The absence of gold rankers had been a better shield than having gold-rankers to defend them.

Despite all this being true, many of the order’s membership continued to disagree with the absence of gold rankers within their number. The leadership in other cells, being of no lower rank than Melody, had been a source of tension in terms of authority within the order. Respect for rank was ingrained across the cultures and religions of Pallimustus and many felt that Melody's resistance to a gold-rank presence was to avoid giving up power.

The trio reached the top of the rubble, passed through the hole in the wall and arrived on a sloping street, the flagstones cracked and pitted. Sendira finally turned to face the other two.

“Your only thoughts should be on the task you have been given,” she admonished. “The disposition of the kidnap target is unrelated to your objectives. You do not understand what is in play or have any need to concern yourselves with her. Put any consideration of her aside and concentrate on the tasks you were given, not those given to others.”

Fila and Ramona glowered but remained silent. They were angry but knew they just had to wait for Melody's poor choices to build the gallows for them. Attempting to kidnap a silver-rank adventurer from Rimaros, with the city's heightened state of awareness and frenzy of adventurer activity was a foolish endeavour. That was why Melody had Laront seeking out information so that they could grab her while she was out on a contract.

The first opportunity to grab the target had been the Adventure Society expedition to the island, which Melody had already rejected. It was close to Rimaros, there were multiple teams and a pair of gold-rankers. The realisation that there were clockwork kings of the island had changed the value proposition, however, pushing Melody onto action. This choice was not sitting well with many of her rivals.

"Once this operation is over," Fila said, "everyone will see that Melody is advancing her personal agenda and risking the order's assets, people and goals to do it. We'll see how arrogant you are then, Sendira."

“Yes,” Sendira told them. “We will. Now, organise the pure servitors. The adventurers will seek to scout us out before acting and we need to move before they make an active response to our arrival.”

The vast majority of the forces the order brought to the island were the pure servitors, implanted with purified cores. This was a reflection of the new disposition of the order’s overall forces. True members of the order had all been purified in the fire of purgation, cleansing them of impurities, but the purifying flames were a limited and precious resource. They were not a feasible path to building the forces required for the war to come.

When the Order of Redeeming Light had established a branch in the Sea of Storms, it was with a specific purpose. They were one of many wings of the Purity church around the world that had been making preparations for years, seeking ways to establish the kind of power that would soon be needed.

The test program carried out in the Sea of Storms was a collaboration with the Purity church's uneasy allies, the Builder cult. This made the Order of Redeeming Light, bearing the gift of their god's purifying flame, the obvious choice to judge the viability of the program. The order's very purpose was to take that which was unclean and purify it, redeeming it as a weapon against the impure.

The core of the program was a clockwork king that the Builder agreed to hand over to the church as part of a larger series of deals and concessions. The order subjected the automaton to the fire of purgation, wiping away the Builder’s influence and claiming the entity for Purity. As a result, the clockwork king no longer produced the clockwork cores it once had. Instead, became a source of the purified cores the order had been using on the essence users of the fortress towns they suborned.

The order regretted that the purified cores were not as ideal a process of transfiguration as the fire of purgation, but what could compare to the power of the most pure and perfect god? The cores engendered a transformation in those that accepted them, which was ideal, or had them forcibly implanted, which was not. Forcible implantation often led to unfortunate, but not insurmountable, behavioural problems.

Forcibly implanted or not, the process rendered essences unusable, replacing their powers with lesser and not entirely predictable alternatives. These were weaker and less numerous than essence abilities but the implantation process raised the person implanted an entire rank. Given that the cores were generally used on garbage essence users, there was a net gain in power. The greatest regret the order had about the process was that, unlike the fire of purgation, the cores failed to purge the inhumanity of the tainted races.

The cores, however, were essential for the war to come. The church needed to replicate the Builder cult’s power to rapidly build up its forces, even if those forces weren’t ideal. So long as their troops were plentiful, pure and obedient, that was all that mattered. The cores commanded the absolute obedience of those in whom they were implanted, which was not something the order mentioned to volunteers.

The order had been infiltrating fortress towns while Rimaros was neglecting them. If the city wasn’t neglecting them, the order made sure it felt like they were until the town’s defenders were desperate enough to accept the order’s overtures. Melody was exceptional at getting whole towns to take cores voluntarily, while other cells had mixed success.

Purity followers were famous for being exclusionary and judgemental, which was not an ideal attitude for winning people over. The current status of the church only made the challenge greater. When the essences users of a targeted town remained resistant to accepting cores, there was the other approach. Forcible implantation was less desirable, but remained acceptable.

The Builder cities moving to attack had been the perfect chance for the order to move openly on a number of their targeted towns. Volunteer essence users were brought away while more reluctant towns were forcibly converted. Only those who were able to die fighting instead of being taken alive were left behind. Either way, the civilians were massacred and the whole thing was disguised as monsters overrunning towns left vulnerable by adventurers too busy to support them.

The Adventure Society, being massively understaffed, had taken weeks to uncover the truth of what was happening. They were only just starting to realise that something more organised and sinister was happening to the fortress towns, although the culprits were obvious with the Purity loyalist’s already having been identified as meddling in the region.

Now that the local powers were catching on to the order’s activities, Melody had chosen to be more overt. She was willing to be more open using the assets the order had built up before the Adventure Society grasped the extent of what they were dealing with. This had been the impetus for having cells collaborate, moving in numbers, showing off their stealthy submarine transports and using the pure servitors to raid the island.

Having used the essence users of fortress towns as a large-scale test of the purity cores, the next step was to establish an infrastructure where what they had accomplished could be scaled up and spread beyond the Sea of Storms.

For that to be possible, the order needed more clockwork kings. Not only did they need to increase the production of pure cores but also have redundancies should any of them be lost to enemy action. As the Builder was unwilling to surrender more of the kings, the order would need to take them for themselves. The news of one or more kings being present on the island was an important opportunity, but acting at the same time as an Adventure Society expedition was a massive risk.

If clockwork kings were on the table they became the priority, with the chance to grab their original target being reduced to a welcome, but secondary, objective. The opportunity to accomplish both made raiding the island a significantly more worthwhile expenditure of resources. The Adventure Society would also soon have a better understanding of the order’s activities and capabilities, so revealing them now was a minimal loss. The chance to use the pure servitors en masse before the Storm Kingdom and the Adventure Society knew about them was not an opportunity that would last forever unused.

That was what finally drove Melody’s decision to rapidly plan and execute the raid, even if the rush lent to unexpected variables. The pure servitors were always intended as disposable forces and there would not be a better opportunity to use them. This was what led to Sendira watching on as Fila and Ramona directed the pure servants off the boat to clamber up the rubble slope.

The pure servitors were a mix of ranks. Iron-rank essence users had become bronze when implanted with cores, while bronze had become silver and the silvers, gold. They were only equivalent to weak monsters of their rank but the gold-rank servitors were still a trump card that could well be the difference against the gold-rankers on the island. As such, each of the five landing parties had two gold servitors, representing a major portion of the order’s overall strength.

“Melody is going to pay for wasting this many gold-rank servitors on snatching up her daughter,” Ramona told Sendira.

“Even if we succeed,” Fila added, “we’re going to lose most of them. Maybe all. Is Melody ready to accept responsibility for that?”

“Melody is fully prepared to bear the responsibility for this operation,” Sendira told them, unperturbed. “Her courage is pure. Can the opportunists you follow say the same?”

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Comments

Jonathan Walker

I kind of hate the fact that evil people are winning a lot in this book.

CptJimmy

Throw the Biscuits overboard!

Nathan Emerson

Wow, complete nutjobs. I hope they get massacred.

mockery jones

Villian chapters are always interesting. Thanks

Anonymous

Ok but can she beat Goku though?

Tom Clough-Macready

I dont like this chapter. It keeps repeating the same info again. Mostly unnecessary exposition.

DicedOnions

Would be neat if Jason just mind kills or mind controls the servitors and wreaks Purity forces but at the same time painting a HUGE political bullseye on his back. Also if they catch the lady in command of this force or one of the two nay sayers it would put Sofie square in the middle of this and possibly stir up the rumor mill.

Robert Nugent

That’s the assumption. We’re assuming mom was Reaper Order until she got purified and split with Dad. Sophie must have a big back story that we don’t know yet.

Jon

Now would be a great time for Jason's anti-Builder aura shenanigans to to a major workout.

Mark Thorne

Normally, I love the chapters. This felt like a lot more tell than show in this one. It was kinda slow to read. :(

mhaj58

Hey Shirt, I'm curious about something. Will any other Greenstone characters be making a return. I know it's a matter of time before Jason and Jory reunite but will we ever see Beth Cavendish or Cassandra Mercer again.

TerrestrialOverlord

This are purity core carriers so they presumably don't have the anti-jason updates...it's going to be fun... Jason might get another notch in his soul.. and since this city is basically like the reaper realm could Jason do something like create a zone like on earth if they reach the core of the facility below the replica façade..

Erasmo Simo

The opportunist? is it the return of the guy that robbed the Builder's cult and ran away?

Hayden Leech

With the tone and theme of these books? They are totally going to grab and brainwash Sophie. It will be tragic and heart breaking. And that loss will be a perfect segue into the next fucked up and awful thing that shirt has lined up.

jimi robert-jones

I'm curious as to whether the presence of gold rank thralls will be counted as a breach of the Jason v Builder agreement.

Skarsol

Normally really enjoy your chapters but this one felt phoned in with a fairly repetitive exposition dump. Typos/grammar seemed a bit more in your face as well. If you need more time then take some days off!

Anonymous

So ... whitecloaks then.

White Neko Knight

I'm 50/50 on if Jason is going to be soul raped again. I'm not sure which will be more interesting honestly.

Anonymous

There comes a point in every story where the reader sits back and says "No more". How much more pain does he have to go through? I mean, it's looking like getting shat on his entire life with emotional pain is Jason's #1 thing. If he loses Sophie after everything he did to save her in the first place. Let alone if he has to fight her for real himself, I don't think we'll like who he becomes after that. I know the whole title and theme is based on Nietzsche, but is it really going to be an entire downhill ride to a devil engulfment.

Allastin

“My ancestors are smiling at me imperial, can you say the same?”

Anonymous

Good chapter otherwise, but that foreshadowing is just .....dark.

Anonymous

Thanks for the chapter :)

Dax

Two dozen lines of mostly inane dialog and a wikipedia article. Looking forward to next week's chapters, but this one just feels like packing foam to round out the week.

Ben

Agreed but I think its belinda I mean I may have missed it but is there a reason why everyone thinks its Sophie's mom?

Anonymous

Man a lot of you are sure whiny when a chapter isn’t exactly what you wanted. Was it the most interesting chapter? No. Is it setting up internal strife among leadership and foreshadowing what’s to come? Yes. And I’d like to see you all write perfectly amazing chapters every day, week after week. Please stop complaining and just enjoy what we get.

Gardor

Odd that any of the zealot Purity cult members could be termed "opportunists", even if it's just a dismissive insult from a holier than thou fellow cultist.

Matthew Bernardin

I'm really surprised you lot whinge as much as you do. It's so rare to find a story that has great pacing. PACING you know as in the opposite of BANG BANG all the freaking time. No one can sustain continual action all the time without downtime, setups and consequences your just left with the glut of mental masturbatory cultivation stories that are a dime a dozen.

Cory C.

There was some good setup and exposition in this chapter. My issue is that its delivery seems a bit.. stilted I guess? Part of that can be contributed to it being a POV from new characters that won't likely get all that much screen time but it also seems to ramble a bit too much for the information it is giving. Parts of this chapter felt like how those cultivation stories will repeat the same information multiple paragraphs in a row just phrased differently and with a bit added each time to pad their word count.

Matthew Bernardin

I agree with that mate. I think the problem is most of your readers don’t have a problem with Jason’s anti authoritarian view point and that interaction between them feels off because it’s almost an antithical point of view. All zealots left or right are insanely tribal because they have to be. Extremism is all about the we are the “true” whatevers and if you ain’t you need to be purged. This essentially breaks down so factionally that you get this nonsense. Like ST ENT where they had an episode where the two religious factions had genocided their planet all over one faction said creation in six days the other said seven and they declared each other heretics.

Adam Miller

Not a single person we have seen anywhere in this series anywhere close in power to anyone in dbz. Based on what we have seen, dawn is the strongest, and she is casual city level. Maybe mountain level of you wanna wank her up a bit. Raditz was 3-4 times moon level, or even planet level in the first arc of the series. The characters in this series have a lot more unique, and hax abilities, but the overall level of power is low compared to other series. Do not read this comment as a criticism of the quality of these books. I know this is nerd shit serious reply to a silly joke.

Hunter Vook

Kinda a let down but some necessary world building in there.

Marc Whipple

If the rest of the gods find out Purity is using Builder artifacts to soul-rape people and still don't do anything about him, then fuck the rest of the gods with red-hot barbed-wire sex toys.

Bert Babb

Ouch, that'd really hurt! We know Purity has been "sanctioned" although we dont really understand what that entails. Yes, the other gods really do need to step up against Purity, but I'm not sure what they can do against Bill since he's from out of town (astrally speaking). This makes me wonder if Bill has his way and Pallumutus is destroyed, what happens to all those gods? Do theydie or fade away with no worshipers and no planet to stand on or do they have emergency escape pods and can they take the fight to another astral level?