Night Cravings Comic Line Art (Patreon)

Greetings, loves.

So, as you can see, I ended up changing a couple of details, panel distribution and things of the sort.

I tried to stay as close as possible to the original idea while figuring out how to make it all look and work together.

I have to say, some portions of text had to be left out, but I think that is part of a comic progression. Like, when is it too much text? Or not enough information? Where is the balance? I like learning this kind of things while practicing.

Once again, I think it all can be improved, but I do like where I am standing right now.

Do let me know what you think.