(Maho Noir) Working on page 1 (Patreon)

Tomorrow is my birthday so I've been sort of all over the place this week. I'm currently way more excited about Maho Noir than I am about ZR, so that's where I've been putting my attention.

Here's the first page's dialogue. It's basically the only section that isn't spoilery. I've got to do the panels and sketch next, but I wanted to have this down to make sure I was taking the space of the narration boxes into account.

I'm doing narration boxes instead of thought balloons and they'll only ever be from the point of view character-- so far that's always Kimura Ran... but I'm not ruling out a story where that shifts at some point. The intention of this is they should feel like they're written by her and the dialogue will have a different font that is more neutral.