Servo situation draft (Patreon)

In my downtime between month shifts, been drawing a lil hypno comic. Drawing out a scene I had when hitting the servo one day. 

Made a storyboard not to long ago, wanted to crack down and make it.

Though I'm not entirely sure about the flow of the comic, whether I need to add less, add more or spread it out. Any feedback is welcome as to how I could improve this comic concept, here or in the discord.

Trying to keep it short and sweet to make it a fun project.