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Does this chapter make you feel any better about the last one? Worse? Do they read better as a pair? There is a slightly expanded section in here about the reasoning for the away mission being set up the way it was. Would moving that into the previous chapter help, do you think, or do people really want to see a full half-chapter of posturing about stuff that can easily be inferred? In favor of just getting on with it, myself.
Leave me your thoughts below!
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