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I changed around the dialog a bit, I think it doesn't quite fit as well as before, but it's alright.  I was worried in the original version it wasn't as clear that they would be doing more trips after the first one with Rikku.

I also wanted the last panel to be a little funnier, but less constructive.

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MinionOfGruumsh

If it's not too late, "I've let lose" should probably be "I've let loose". But little typo aside, very nice. I definitely feel it conveys what's going on better now. This whole comic has been quite amusing and entertaining, so this care and attention to detail is much appreciated. :)