Pulse 468 & 469 WIP 1 (Patreon)
Published:
2022-03-15 12:11:06
Imported:
2024-01
Content
Page 468-
Okay, a wordless page. We've got-
- Annie hiding behind Thomas as he carts the suit along
- Annie waves as Thomas leaves her behind at her room. I wanted her to be cute and a little friendly, but not too much.
- Thomas continues on alone.
- Annie removes the shirt and we have some sign she's naked.
- Annie trying to put on a bunch of clothes at once (not sure I like this panel, might rework it).
- Annie arrives at the disassembly room where the suit is already on the track.
- The suit starts being dissembled.
Page 469-
- A big room shot of all of the parts of the suit.
- We're looking at Annie who is looking down at the parts. She might say "I don't see anything wrong."
- She starts getting up and looks over at Thomas "I don't understand what all these parts do, but I can't find anything that -looks- broken or melted."
- Annie: "There's only one other thing I've always wondered about. That part The Silver Dragon added to the suit. I couldn't figure out it's function.
- Annie: "BUT what are we risking at this point? The suit already doesn't work. And he did try to help us with the sleepwalkers."