Pulse 468 & 469 WIP 1 (Patreon)

Page 468-

Okay, a wordless page.  We've got-

• Annie hiding behind Thomas as he carts the suit along
• Annie waves as Thomas leaves her behind at her room.  I wanted her to be cute and a little friendly, but not too much.
• Thomas continues on alone.
• Annie removes the shirt and we have some sign she's naked.
• Annie trying to put on a bunch of clothes at once (not sure I like this panel, might rework it).
• Annie arrives at the disassembly room where the suit is already on the track.
• The suit starts being dissembled.

Page 469-

• A big room shot of all of the parts of the suit.
• We're looking at Annie who is looking down at the parts.  She might say "I don't see anything wrong."
• She starts getting up and looks over at Thomas "I don't understand what all these parts do, but I can't find anything that -looks- broken or melted."
• Annie: "There's only one other thing I've always wondered about.  That part The Silver Dragon added to the suit.  I couldn't figure out it's function.
• Annie: "BUT what are we risking at this point?  The suit already doesn't work.  And he did try to help us with the sleepwalkers."