Nani BE Comic WIP 2 (Patreon)
Published:
2021-07-30 09:02:32
Imported:
2024-01
Content
How about this? Is the dialog better? (the first dialog needs to end with a question mark.) My intention was the joke of the second panel was partly that it wasn't logical that she could have grown so much and it not be noticed before.
Any thoughts about Sara's hair? I guess her remake look was barely shown in anything.