Maximum Max 11-17 WIP (Patreon)

Okay, here's my plans for the next few comics-

Comic 11-

Max stops her sister from showing too much affection (for Sam) by getting her Mom and Sam to hug-- allowing Max to mingle.

Comic 12-

Trying to show time is passing.  I don't know if I should try to show every female here as bustier than Max?  Even if they don't look related?  (i.e. should both women here be bustier, even if the dark haired one at best must be less related?)  Max overhears her brother-in-law Noah and someone else talking.

Comic 13-

I don't know if they directly say it's a breast growth formula or not, or if it's a read-between the lines thing.  Whatever they say here or later, it's about bringing out your maximum potential genetically.  The results are completely unpredictable, but it's just provoking their bodies to do what it could have done anyway.

Comic 14-

Max is just stunned, then still stunned with the same face with their father, who imagine is some giant hulking guy.  I have the theory that their parents are retired superheroes.  Maybe they don't have powers anymore.  Then cut to the end as if Max wasn't paying attention to anything else... although maybe this it too fast of a cut I should space it out a little more.

Comic 15-

Some kind of wrap up with Sam, maybe she accidentally encourages Max to get bigger breasts?  She does mention that Ben, Max's boyfriend is away (still, from earlier in the comic).

Comic 16-

The first NSFW comic in the series.  We see Max topless as she considers what to do.  I'm not sure how fast to make the pacing here, Max is a very attractive woman- and doesn't really need bigger breasts, but probably wants them, but never thought it was possible.  She probably just wants to compare better to her family.  She doesn't have any big plans.

Comic 17-

I thought the funniest and fastest way to cut ahead was to have her talking about the whole thing and then display she's talking about it in front of Noah, Sam's husband.

There's a few things that need to be covered here past this-

One is I need to give a reason why Sam doesn't want to do the experiment too (at least at this point).  Her reason might be that she's bustier than her Mother was before children.  She's worried as she and Noah have children that she'll already get a lot bigger.

The second is that I need to give Noah a reason to allow Max into the experiment.  Three options come to mind-

• Sam doesn't know about the experiment, and Max threatens to tell her.  Either Noah doesn't want her bigger, or he worries she'd be too competitive and get bigger than she'd want.  This one seems unlikely it's the most unnecessarily dramatic option.
• Max convinces Noah she's be the perfect wildcard into the experiment, that's she the smallest from a busty family.  This is the most logical option.
• Maybe Max says she'll give him sex advice with Sam?  That they talk about everything and she can verbally (and with notes) help him wreck his wife.  Max says that with Ben away, she's living vicariously through them.  This is the silliest and most sexy-comedy-logical one, but I'm not sure yet.