Maximum Max 1-10 Edits (Patreon)

How about this?  I altered the fourth-wall text again to be yellow.  It's the same color as the narration boxes in my comics.

Is this better?  I considered using a different font too, but someone a few years ago convinced me that using too many different fonts made the comic more difficult to read.

...This comic will have NSFW pages eventually, it's just been a lot of setup.