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As you can see, this page originally started out very differently.  Some parts of the original version of this page will be on the next page instead.

I thought this got to the point faster, it also sped up the idea of Annie making new drones, connecting this back to the beginning of the chapter where she had to throw away her old drone.

I spent a lot of time rewriting the sixth panel with all of the jokes.  My original version seemed too much like Annie was intentionally making jokes about her bust.  Then I went with a version where she was apologizing honestly for keeping a secret, then a version where she explained what had happened to her.  But I felt like I needed a joke there, or at least Annie stammering saying the wrong things.

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