Pulse 410 WIP 3 (Patreon)
Published:
2020-12-10 12:22:17
Imported:
2024-01
Content
Making progress. Not sure I like panel 6, the one where she's trying to zip up the top. I might erase and redraw something similar. The proportions aren't great, and I feel like it's missing the energy of the previous panel, and seems too similar to the seventh and final panel of the page.
I need to review all of the dialog and add both tailor the dialog to be a little more specific to the character, and also add some more little jokes or funny comments.