Rikku XL WIP 1 & 2 (Patreon)

I promised a picture of a bustier than normal Rikku on Twitter.  I think it might end up being 2-3 pictures because I was given a number of good ideas.

Here's two WIPs.  Originally she was going to be wearing one of those "oppai" shirts from One Punch Man, although translated into Al Bhed ("ubbye").  But I didn't think it ended up being the right angle to read the t-shirt well.

I kinda feel like there could be something wrong with this, or I should stop and look at it again with fresh eyes instead of completing it.  I wonder if I made a mistake not including her right hand.  I had thought so much of it was covered by her bust it wasn't worth inking it.

I'm thinking about posting more WIPs of any kind here, maybe even any pictures.

Any thoughts welcome.