The Perfect Girl - Chapter Three (Patreon)

Bethany decided to give things another go with her boyfriend. She wanted to know if they had a future, and to do that, she said she needed for me not to be there distracting her.

That lasted a whole week before she invited me over to talk and ended up asking me to spend the night.

Meanwhile, things were going well with Alice. She was different from any girl I'd ever been with, but that wasn't a bad thing. I learned to enjoy her particular brand of humor.

I smoked with her a few times, and each time the sex was mind blowing. She bought a condo with the help of her parents and she insisted we fuck in every room. Even the hallway got a turn.

We never had the actual, "are we official?" talk, although I think she assumed we were. I was loyal, the only exception being her best friend.

After a month, Bethany gave up on her boyfriend and they broke up officially. He still wanted to be in his daughter's life, but he didn't want to take any next steps in the relationship. Plus, they still hadn't been intimate since she'd started showing.

I couldn't get enough of her, and I wanted her to be mine. However, I was afraid of ruining the girl's friendship. I'd had an ex-girlfriend run off with one of my friends before, and I still remembered how alone and destroyed it had left me.

Alice's casual mention of suicidal thoughts when I'd met her on our first date still weighed on my mind. I was walking a thin line, and I had no idea how to fix it.

Finally, two months later, I couldn't wait any longer. I was worried Alice was getting too attached to me, and holding off any longer was only going to make it worse. Summer was over, and she was going back to class. I hoped her work would serve as a good distraction.

There is no good way to tell the person you're seeing that you're in love with their best friend since elementary school, and that you've been sneaking around together for months.

So, I decided to go big. I invited her out for sushi and figured I'd break the news when she at least had her favorite meal in her.

I also wanted to skip the whole, "we've been hooking up behind your back" aspect. Instead, I only planned to tell her I'd fallen for Bethany and wanted to pursue her.

It was the honest thing to do. Or at least the fair thing. I cared about her enough to be respectful. I only hoped she wouldn't take it too hard.

We agreed to meet at the restaurant, and I arrived first. When she appeared she had a dazed look on her face, and I worried she already knew.

"Are you okay?" I asked.

"I don't think I can order," she said.

"Why? What's wrong?"

She pulled out her phone and held the screen up to my face.

There, in all its glory, was a picture of a little white plastic stick with two lines on it.

"What."

She pulled the phone back and giggled. "Can you believe it?"

"I- seriously?"

She nodded. She couldn't help but smile.

"Isn't this crazy? I mean, I know we didn't use condoms, but you always pulled out!"

"Well, not always…"

"I can get rid of it, if you want. It wouldn't be the first time. But… I don't know. I really like you." Her face lit up with a big smile. "For the first time, I'm actually more excited than I am scared. It's a weird feeling, and I think it means I found the one. Either way, no matter what you want to do, I'm just happy."

Fuck me.

"We should keep it," my mouth said before my brain ever cleared it to speak.

"Really?" her eyes teared up. "Can we go eat somewhere else, then? I don't even know what's safe for me to eat, but I know sushi is bad!"

"Sure," I said, imagining Bethany's face when I would tell her the news. The thought killed me. But what could I do? Not only was Alice pregnant, she also loved me?

"We could walk over to that Mexican food place. A quesadilla is safe, right?"

"I think so…"

"I'll call Beth. She'll know! Oh, I can't wait to tell her!"

My heart sank as Alice dialed her best friend's number.

"Hey! Guess what? I'm fucking pregnant!" There was a pause, then I heard screaming on the other end. "I know! I can't believe it! So, do you know what I can eat? We were going to get sushi, but now we're thinking Mexican. Yeah, Andrew is taking me out, trying to be nice. Yeah, we're going to keep it. Can you believe it? We'll both be mommies together!"

Fuck.

We stopped at the intersection and I pressed the button for the crosswalk.

“Yeah, he’s here! You want me to put you on speaker? Okay!”

“Hey, congratulations guys!” Bethany said with her best impression of a person happy to hear the news.

“Thanks,” I said. “Yeah, I’m still kind of in shock.”

“Well, since you’re already surprised, I should tell you some news of my own.”

“What’s that?” I asked, feeling numb to the situation already.

Bethany paused dramatically. “I am too.”

“What!” Alice shouted. “Are you serious?”

“Yeah. I took a test this morning.”

I talked to her this afternoon. She hadn’t told me. Apparently, she hadn’t wanted to use the news against me. She wanted to let me choose her over Alice on my own.

“Just one test? I took three!” Alice said.

“Five, actually.”

“Congrats! I didn’t think you’d even got any from Will before you broke up. Are you planning on getting back together?”

“Uhh… no. I mean, he didn’t want to work on our relationship after the first one, why would another one change his mind?”

“Damn. I’m really sorry, girl. But don’t worry! Andrew and I will be there for you.”

The mental cloud receded. I’d been numb since Alice hit me with the news, but hearing Bethany’s voice over the phone brought me back to reality. I hadn’t chosen Alice. The only reason I was considering it was because she was pregnant. But if they both were…

“Actually, I have something to tell you,” I said.

“What is it?” Alice asked, still smiling at me innocently.

I took a deep breath. Best to get it over with. “The night at the beach house, when I went to take Bethany out to pick up batteries…”

“Andrew, no!” Bethany said over the phone.

“She was hurting because she was so full, and I offered to help her out by… drinking.”

“Seriously?” Alice asked, still not understanding where I was going.

“One thing led to another, and we hooked up.”

“Oh.”

“I’m really sorry,” I said. “I know we weren’t officially dating yet, but it was still an asshole move for me to do something like that.”

“Yeah.”

“I’m so sorry,” Bethany added.

The light turned green, but we didn’t move.

Alice stared at her phone. “So… Andrew is the father.”

“Yeah.”

She looked back at me. “You have two kids on the way.”

I nodded.

“And he just found out,” Bethany said.

Alice took a step closer and looked up at me. I fully expected a slap, but I didn’t make any moves to dodge it. Instead, she only stared into my eyes as if trying to read my soul.

“Are you ready for this?”

“Not at all,” I admitted.

“Are you going to take care of her?”

“Yes.”

“Are you going to be the father to both of our kids?”

“Yes.”

She smiled.

I still couldn’t believe I wasn’t being punched in the face. The light had already turned red and cars were moving behind me, making me realize how easy it would be for her to push me into traffic.

“I think you’re going to make a great father.”

“Yes he is,” Bethany said.

“There’s more,” I said, moving slightly to the side, just in case.

“Tell me.”

“I love her,” I said.

“Of course you do.” Her expression was unreadable, and it scared me. “How could you not?”

I looked at her phone in its pink case and grit my teeth. Now I was going to hurt both girls. But I needed to say it.

“And I love you, too.”

Alice’s smile returned. “You’d better.”

There was a long silence before Beth asked, “are you okay, Alice?”

“No.”

No one spoke for several seconds. The light turned green again, and Alice took a step out onto the crosswalk. She made it three steps before turning around.

“Come on! I need a quesadilla!”

I hurried after her. Still in shock, I grabbed her hand and she held it.

“What’s going on?” Bethany asked, sounding faint against the cars passing by.

“You should meet us here at the taqueria,” Alice said. “The three of us need to talk.”

Bethany walked in to find both of us with food in our mouths. Alice finished with her meal and had started on my nachos. Both of us had sour cream all over our fingers.

Beth wore a black leather jacket over her shoulders, a move I imagined was designed to cover herself up to look less threatening to Alice as a rival. If so, it wasn't working as intended.

“Hey,” she said after sitting down.

“Don’t you want to order something?” Alice asked.

“I’m not hungry. Don’t you think we should talk first?”

“You should never make big decisions when you’re horny or hungry. Andrew, could you get her something?”

“What do you want?” I asked Beth.

“Those nachos look amazing.”

“Chicken or carne asada?”

“Chile verde.”

“You got it.”

I went to order and kept checking on the girls as they talked quietly. Instead of returning to the table, I waited and watched the order get made before taking it back to the table.

“Here you go,” I said as I placed the nachos in front of Bethany and sat back down next to her in my place across from Alice.

Alice reached forward and grabbed a big, meaty chip. “You don’t mind if we share, do you, Beth? After all, what’s mine is yours.”

“Not at all,” Bethany said as she looked over at me with a big smile. She reached over and squeezed my thigh.

“So what did I miss?” I asked.

“I asked Beth what she has that I don’t. And do you know what she said?”

“No?”

“She said you liked her tits.”

I looked over at Beth, hoping for a clue as to where this was going.

“And?”

“It’s true, isn’t it? You wish I had a bigger rack. And hers is epic.”

I turned back to Alice. “Uh…”

“It’s always been this way. In middle school, I had the ass and she had the tits. We always said, together we would make the perfect girl.”

I looked back and forth between the girls. “I wish I could come up with something in my own defense, but I currently have nothing.”

“Well, Beth reminded me of something.”

“I told Alice it was okay because her pregnancy boobs are going to kick in.”

I chuckled nervously.

“So, we made a decision,” Bethany continued.

“And?”

“Tell him, Alice.”

We both turned to the blonde across the table.

“We made a pact, way back then, that we would never let a boy come between us.”

“Smart. So… you’re still friends?” I asked.

“Well, we have to be, don’t we? After all, we’ll be sharing a boyfriend.”

“And a baby daddy,” Bethany added.

I swallowed nervously. “You… seriously?”

“Congratulations, Andrew,” Bethany said.

Alice grinned. “You’re the luckiest dude I’ve ever met.”

“Holy shit,” I said.

“But I’m the one who gets you tonight.”

I followed Alice home, and I half expected her to have changed her mind by the time we got to her place. Instead, she acted giddy as we entered her condo and turned to kiss me.

“You want me?” she asked.

“Very much.”

“You can have me.”

“Good, because you are incredibly sexy.”

She giggled. “Even though you know I’m going to be the mother of your child?”

“Even more so.”

“Show me.”

“You got it,” I said as I picked her up and carried her to her room as she squealed.

I tore her clothes off and kissed down her body as I had the first time we’d got together. She grabbed her phone and began scrolling, annoying me until I realized she’d been choosing a song.

“I didn’t know how to react when I found out you had been fucking my best friend behind my back the entire time we were together,” she said as the song began playing.

I stopped licking her nipple and moved up to face her as she continued.

“And I thought I should be mad, or I should be pissed, or I should break things off with you and never talk to Beth again.”

I nodded softly.

"When you told me about the two of you, I knew right away that was the reason she's been so happy lately. That's why I couldn't be mad at her. All I could think of was this song.”

She waited a moment for the chorus.

“All you need is love, love,” she sang along with The Beatles as a tear dripped down her cheek. “Love is all you need.”

I brushed her tears aside as she smiled sweetly at me. Once the chorus ended she paused the song and stared at me intently.

“And you really love me, don’t you?”

“I do.” This time it wasn’t my mouth speaking for me. I really did.

“Then we’ll make this work.”

I kissed her.

I’d meant to build up slowly, using foreplay to my advantage in reestablishing our physical connection. But now I couldn’t wait. I needed to show this girl in my arms how I felt about her right then.

I bit her neck, leaving a mark for her students to ask about when she started her class on Monday. When she protested I grabbed her legs forcefully and spread them apart.

“Oh! Who is this in my bed?” she asked.

Then I ravaged her. Hard, fast thrusts. I didn’t care how tight she was, or how fast I knew I would inevitably cum at this speed.

“You can cum inside me whenever you want now,” she said as if reading my mind.

I sped up even faster, gripping her thighs from underneath and bouncing her small body on my cock, fucking her hard and fast and filling the room with the sounds of skin slapping against skin and her headboard banging against the wall.

I came inside her so hard I saw stars, and I didn’t wait to recover, I only continued fucking right through it.

We didn’t worry about how loud we were being, or what the neighbors thought. Or how many times we could go, or how late it was. We only fucked, rutted, groaned, screamed, and made love throughout the night.

We’d switch between hard and soft, rough and gentle, animalistic and tender.

I didn’t have the words to tell her how I felt. I needed a song of my own, but not one written by anyone else, something entirely original and written for her. Instead, I showed her by fucking her.

I thought the message was coming across, but then she asked me something.

“Who do you love more?”

I stopped thrusting into her as I stood to the side of the bed where I had been fucking her with one leg over my shoulder.

“The one I’m with at the moment,” I answered honestly.

“And that’s true when you’re with her too?”

I nodded, somewhat surprised she’d caught on to my implication.

“So, what about when we’re both in the room?” she asked.

I thrust into her again.

“My dear Alice, are you suggesting a threesome?”

“You would be so lucky.”

“I’m the luckiest dude you’ve ever met.”

She chuckled. “Don’t count on it.”

“I won’t,” I said. “But I also don’t need one, if I have you. You’re the wild, crazy girl who I never know what you’ll say next. Seriously, you never cease to surprise me.”

“Hey.”

“And Bethany is the boring, responsible mom. I’ll drop by her place just to grab a juice box and ask her to do my laundry.”

Alice giggled. “I’m telling her you said that."

“My point is, even if I don’t ever convince the two of you to get drunk one night-”

“Not for nine months.”

“Shit, going to have to get used to that.”

“Continue.”

“Even without a threesome, as long as I have you, I have the perfect girl.”

“Yeah?”

"Because you shared your friend with me."

She rolled her eyes.

“And I'm one lucky motherfucker.”

“Damn right!” she shouted as I tossed her back on the bed and mounted her from behind.

I came inside her so many times that by the time we passed out there was a giant puddle on her side of the bed. But it didn’t matter because she fell asleep on top of me.

The End

Dedicated to Andrew

Backstory

Since getting my new desktop last month, I’ve been attempting to learn other 3D modeling programs. Sadly, I’ve generally found it more difficult than I expected, especially considering I’ve been doing 3D modeling pretty heavily over the past years, and even used to play around with it for the past two decades.

But that’s why I’m learning now, so for future projects I’ll have some idea what I’m doing, unlike when I started Hypnosis and was still putting the girls in front of stock images for lack of 3D environments. Why make the switch, you ask? Partially for the improved look, partially for the flexibility. But also because of Steam’s rules about not using HS models. I won’t be able to release Hypnosis or Endowed on there, and that’s okay. But for a future project, I hope to be able to put it on there to catch a bigger audience.

There are two main programs I’ve been playing with, Daz and VaM. Daz3D is the main program you see in a lot of visual novels. Ever play Being A Dik? That’s the style. It can look great, but it’s a timely process. VaM, or Virt-A-Mate, is more like what I’m currently using, Honey Select. It’s essentially built as a sex simulator, so things likes poses and animations are a lot easier, as they are generally built in.

The graphics in VaM are a lot better than HS, but still not quite up there with Daz in terms of lighting or the large amount of assets. So it’s easier to use initially, but has more limitations over all. Still, it’s fun to play with.

The blonde girl is one of the premade character situations it comes with, and when I saw her, I immediately thought, “damn, that reminds me of Teacher”…

Teacher was a high school teacher I dated a few years back. We got along well enough. The only problem was she wasn’t the most… stable? Normally, she wouldn’t have passed the crazy/hot scale. But she was one of the hottest girls I’ve ever been with. 

She was somewhere in the Danger Zone:

She always had a thing for Alice In Wonderland, so that's how she got the name here. We had fun for a summer, but as she went back to work during the school year, we started seeing each other less and less until things simply fizzled. 

I was seeing a couple of other girls at the time, so it wasn’t the worst thing. However, being as how we ended things on good terms, she remained one of those, “what if” kind of scenarios where there wasn’t any closure. I’d been meaning to make a story based on her at some point, but finding a 3D model that looked like her gave an extra incentive to do so.

So the story jumps right into the time we went to her dad’s place on the river. We listened to records and hooked up for the first time. Just like in the story, I was premature for the first time in my life. I was amazed she could feel that good, as I’d never experienced anything like it. Plus, she was insanely hot naked. I wasn’t even embarrassed, I was impressed.

Her friend came over that night, wearing a low cut top showing off her massive tits she had from nursing. Unlike the story, I made no such move on her, as I’m not an asshole. However, the story asks, “what would have happened if I did?” I always knew that if I wrote a story about Teacher, her friend would also be in it.

I wasn’t sure how the story would end. I’ve had a lot of harem and threesome endings, so I did my best to avoid that. However, I wanted to give the protagonist a happy ending all the same, and tried to make it believable.

My other big goal with this story was to keep it short. With that, I feel like I succeeded. We start right in the action, and we don’t waste a lot of time with character motivations and whatnot. I’ve been too long winded lately, and my goal was to try to finish something quickly.

I’m happy with the result, as this was mostly written on my phone as I was trying to drift off to sleep over the past month. I wanted to keep Hypnosis my main priority in order to get it finished as soon as possible, but this was a nice way to give my mind a break at times.

I’ve been doing the “write a few paragraphs as I fall asleep” thing for a while now, and the result is several half finished stories. The writing is easy, it’s the editing that takes time. What made this easier is the fact it’s shorter at around 25 pages. My longest (unedited) story is already five times that, and it’s not even finished. It’s about some of the girls the Hypnosis girls are based on, only following the events of two years later and without a magical watch involved. I think you guys will like it when it’s done, but I don’t imagine that will be for a while.

I’ll continue working with the other 3D modeling programs in the future, and the best way I can think of to turn that into extra content for you guys is to put my “practice” efforts into stories (especially ones I’ve already written) and short comics. Once I’m better at it, comics will be a great way to learn the specifics before using that knowledge to build future games.

Otherwise, what did you think of the format? I’ve tried adding visuals to stories in the past, but most of those stories were longer. I thought some of you might appreciate the shorter story, something easy you could read through in one sitting.

When I’m making things as side content, I tend to think, “most people are here for the games, how can I make this feel similar?” And that leads to longer stories with similar focuses and visuals added throughout. However, sometimes a long story can feel daunting, and for that reason the short story has its advantages.

I'm always looking to add more side content for you guys to give you something to do while waiting for the next update to come out, so once I get better with the visuals I'll also start adding a few more comics that are short and sweet.

The protagonist of this story is named Andrew, and I did that to dedicate it to my buddy who recently passed away due to colon cancer. He was a good guy and will be missed.

Thanks for reading!