Sharing Dessert - Endowed Comic (Patreon)

Hey everyone! 

I've been looking for new ways to get more content out between game updates. Random renders are fun and all, but they miss the benefit of a narrative. I finally found a format I'm happy with, so I wanted to share it with you!

The comic is relatively short at 30 frames. It stars Charlotte, who we were introduced to in the most recent chapter of Endowed. It's mostly a test of how well I could take a model and make her bigger, so the main concept is weight gain. 

If all around curves are not your thing and you prefer hourglass only, no worries. Although I plan to give Charlotte a path similar to this later down the road, it will be entirely optional and labeled as such.

You can download the comic as individual pictures or as a PDF file.

Background info

I've played around with the comic format several times, since they are simple to view, download, etc. The problem I had was the effort to make the text look decent was always more than I'd like. If the point was to make things easier, it shouldn't be more effort than working on the game. I want to spend less time, not more.

Here's an example frame:

This format is simple enough. I put the text in the same general place it would appear in Ren'py, with the benefit of a thick border and shadow to make it more readable. There aren't name boxes, the character speaking is only indicated by color. The only issue there is for people who deal with colorblindness, but I suppose I could also try a different font for the speaker.

Personally, I like the placement and look of it far better than what I came up with for The Return. What do you think? Is there anything you'd change about the format?

Thanks, everyone!