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Lockdown With Victoria And Her Sister (Story) (Patreon)

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2020-12-25 23:42:25
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2021-01-08 09:30:58
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Hey everyone!


Here's a story I wrote back in 2021 about a guy, his girlfriend and her sister, all surviving the lockdown of 2020 together. Since then, I went back to edit it and rewrite a few sections, with the intention of adding a few different endings. 

I really liked the model for Angie and decided to update the one for Victoria, so I've also been going back and updating and adding far more renders than before, as well as splitting it up into chapters. The rewrite is currently on the ninth chapter.


Links for the story - DeviantArt - Chyoa.com 


DeviantArt is easy and also offers other stories, but it requires a login to view mature content. Chyoa does not require a login and also offers the option to customize the protagonist's name.

Alternately, you can download the original version of the story at the bottom of this post.


Summary:

Lockdown With Victoria And Her Sister goes with the concept of "What if 2020 actually benefitted somebody?"

It's about a guy named Dan who allows his girlfriend Victoria to move in with him during quarantine and, being the nice guy that he is, lets her sister Angie live with them as well. Angie is the curvier of the two sisters and she claims that both sisters have genetics that means that when they gain weight, it always goes to exactly the right places.

As the year progresses, both girls are no longer to go to the gym and, with the healthy foods being hoarded, are forced to eat more snacks and fatty foods.

Along the way, Dan will find that he and Angie also seem to have a strong connection and find it harder and harder to deny their mutual attraction for the sake of Victoria.

As I mentioned in the previous post, my motivations for writing it included getting practice, creating something extra for you guys, putting out a story I'd had sitting around in the back of my mind for a while and simply using the time I had during the holidays to write to keep busy since I haven't been able to use my laptop as much.


Thanks, everyone!


Enjoy!

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Anonymous

This is an amazing Christmas surprise! Thank you and I hope you're having a great holiday.

Mathew Percival

FUCK ME that was good! For the love of just about EVERYTHING please make this game number 3 after you finish Hypnosis, that was seriously fucking hot!!!

Dysentia

My one gripe is that the png numbers aren't in order of appearance. Other than that though, it was great!

Anonymous

I love this story and everything about it so much that it is PAINFUL. To me, It's fantastic to know that there are people out there that imagine scenarios this deeply that encompass all the fetishes and fantasies I can hardly believe anyone else would ever fathom besides me. It's an unreal experience to feel that understood by a writer. At the same time it's painful to read each line that you've woven together into this narrative with such VIVID detail and realism that it makes it feel as though it should be so easily achievable by any of us who desire it. People write entire NOVELS with hundreds of pages to cram every single detail of a character, their backstory, their wardrobe and what they ate for fucking brunch... I was never the type to be able to translate THAT much text into mental images enough to maintain any coherent understanding of why it matters. I am no more THERE in the character's shoes now that I know exactly what the wind is doing to Character 'A's hair at the moment and what that reminds Character 'B' of from their childhood. That drivel does nothing but remove me from the here and now of the narrative and leaves me more confused trying to understand the characters than not. With a mere 100~ pages, you manage to weave a multi-year mini-narrative that exists to tell a STORY. If nothing eventful happens for days, you skip it. If only generally notable things happen, you sum it up in a couple of sentences. Then- when anything important at all happens between characters? You write several paragraphs filled to the brim: not with meaningless nuanced detail occurring within a 30 second time span, but filled with REAL conversations like we have with REAL people everyday. Back and forth responses without filling every line in between them with endless descriptors... instead you let the dialogue speak for itself to easily get across each character's meaning and intentions. I'm NEVER once confused about how something was meant to come off or how any character is PRECISELY feeling about one another at any given scene. Everything manages to be CONCISE yet INTUITIVE, never rushing past anything I want to last longer nor overstaying it's welcome. Of course it's easy to write any adult/erotic novel that gets it's 'point' across... that is- the point of getting off or simply conveying fictional erotic scenarios for a reader's pleasure. Far too many people settle for only this and give the medium it's bad, cheesy stigma. But somehow... I get through your stories with more than 'the point'. I close my eyes and can still see the tension of Dan and Angie doing their best to put up a good front for Maria, her insight into her daughters' hearts piercing right through said front when she calls them out, leaving Angie to finally exhale all her tensions when her head falls to Dan's shoulder and she can finally TOUCH him... finally feel the physical support of being able to lean on him for comfort and acknowledge how she feels about him out in the open to someone she can now TALK to about the predicament they're in. I can still feel Victoria's stubborn pride beginning to be gnawed away by how helpless she is in admiring her sister's experience and skill. It's easy to call someone like Angie a 'slut' without thinking about the reality of it. Superficially of course she wants to resist accepting it and trash her sister, but she is absolutely enthralled by how attentive and passionate Angie is in not only pleasuring Dan... but the raw, unmatched and uninhibited enjoyment she's experiencing in the act itself. She desires to be THAT free of inhibition as well, feeling less and less capable of denying her sister the same when Dan shows more and more his capacity to truly and authentically love both of them equally. And of course Dan himself... it's impossible to not still taste the absolute torment of someone he deeply loved leaving him, feeling him disconnect and grow distant while he processed the breakup with Victoria and finally fell into his pillow before he could let the tears truly come. His anguish over her abandoning him couldn't soak in properly when it was constantly countered by his guilt of being unfaithful to her for months. Caught between an impossible choice that he was desperate to not have to make, leaving him with his wish fulfilled in the most bitter of ways... yet filled with even more guilt that he KNEW he now could not stop himself from diving head-first into a relationship with Angie. Your use of everyday brand/media/franchise references along with such relatably written dialogue and concisely raw emotion makes these characters leap off the page... You feel as though Maria would bust your balls for juggling her daughters' hearts just as much as she would embrace you into her family with love overnight because of how dedicated you are to standing by both of them and protecting them at all costs. You feel as though Victoria is just like other girls you've known in highschool that mature overnight and suddenly become overwhelmed by the feeling of attention they received for it, seemingly becoming different people as their internal conflict struggles between remaining loyal to you and just diving into the sea of new experiences presenting themselves to her. You feel that characters such as Hypnosis' Leah and Ashley would be JUST as THRILLED to binge watch the latest season of The Mandalorian with you as you are with them, loving you for how unapologetically real you are in sharing your interests and passions with them and not just over your aptitude in using your dick. Ending up in these scenarios with these types of people at all (let alone all at the same time) is such an unimaginable stretch of reality that other writers would struggle to convince any reader of a grounded, tangible reality where it could actually happen... But you, my friend... Somehow I put my phone down after experiencing your stories and feel as if I've woken from a dream- a dream that moments ago convinced you that your life existed a certain way with certain people, but now fades away from reach to be replaced by the ordinary reality you went to bed in the night before, leaving you almost desperate to go back under and return to these people you knew before they slip from your memory altogether. I know it's supposed to be the entire point of storytelling, but no author's literature has ever made me feel so connected to their universe. Maybe that's because most narratives are written around main characters who do not align with the values and desires that I do. Maybe the simple concept of having both of your cakes and eating them too resulting in a functioning HAPPY ending for everyone while still realistically enough forcing the characters to overcome various consequences to get there... maybe that's just not poetic enough for most audiences. Maybe it's akin to the classic impossible trope of 'World Peace' where everyone everywhere can agree on something and compromise to be united. It's too perfect to ever be reality and doesn't make for interesting literature... But it can. And in this case? ... It absolutely does. Through trial and tribulation- Victoria, Angie, Maria and Dan found happiness through acceptance of a conglomeration of different lifestyle choices all of which the world views as perverse, humanizing these lifestyle choices in the best ways possible. Most of us will not find ourselves in such perfect scenarios in life, leaving us only to dream of them. Because of your writings, I can close my eyes and for a moment TRULY feel as though in some distant alternate life... I have lived and earned that blissful happiness alongside loving partners that find the same blissful happiness... in me. Well done. Thank you for these stories.

expandinguniverse
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That's a book review right there! Thanks for sharing your thoughts and reactions, I'm humbled to hear them and that so many of my intentions with the story came through. I actually felt the same way you said when I finished the story where you didn't want the characters to fade away after finishing it. If it matters, Victoria was based on the same girl as Gabriela from Endowed. Originally, I thought Gabriela's character arc would be the same as in this story, but I recently realized that it doesn't fit for that narrative and still wanted to tell it, so here we are. Meanwhile, Angie's arc ended up being closer to home with my current fiance, when we were in a situation where we tried our best to stay "friends" but felt ourselves inevitably pulled to each other. One of my main concerns for this story was in how well I was conveying the passage of time, trying not to make anything feel too rushed or too slow, so I'm glad that it worked for you. Anyway, thanks for the insight as well as the kind words! I enjoyed this story a lot more than I expected, and I'm glad that you did as well. Cheers!

Illu, Fractal Tiger

I had to comment again. I have been thinking about the story all day. It’s great. I would love to read more stories by you.

Anonymous

Maybe the greatest story I've ever read, you have some fucking talent man.

Anonymous

I just wish to see more renders of this story, maybe make a comic out of it

joeluck777

Great Story! I think adding images when they doing their measurements would add to the growth progression. Maybe a front shot and back (or side) shot since we are going for boobs, ass, and preg. expansion. Thank you for the story and all your hard work in Hypnosis/Endowed.