BSC 8: She-Hung Script: Page 1-5 (Patreon)

This morning my wife found what appears to be a bedbug in our bed. This meant doing some early morning shopping for Bedbug treatment, as well as spending all day washing everything down, spraying it with poison, and washing pretty much anything that will fit in a laundry machine. She's been getting rashes for about a week now but this is the first one we've seen, so hopefully we're able to catch it before it becomes a major problem. We had to throw out all our pillows, though... to be fair I've owned pretty much all of them since College and they were flat and gross looking, so in that sense it was a blessing in disguise. Still, we can't really go out shopping right now so I had to order replacements online, so I guess I'll be using folded up towels for a few days. Anyway, dealing with all that (which I'm still working on... just had to take a break from cleaning things) prevented me from getting a proper comic page done, but I still wanted to work on something, so I wrote the first five pages of my She-Hulk script. 

I was originally planning to start with Jen already transformed and the focus was just on her getting an erection, but I had a fan express excitement at the transformation scene... and honestly that's something really unique to the character so I made sure to include it. I've attached the document to this post, but I'll go ahead and post the whole thing here for those who want to read it. I still don't have a solid ending in mind so I'm really open to suggestions to that, or any changes to the script you might be interested in.

Banana Shortcake 8: She-Hung

Page 1: Interior, late afternoon. Jennifer Walter’s office has been destroyed by Titania, now left in rubble of broken office furniture and fluttering legal papers. Titania has Jennifer in a headlock, smothering Jennifer against her huge breasts. While Titania is wearing her traditional costume, Jen is wearing a simple black suit jacket over a blouse and pencil skirt, along with thigh high stockings and high heels. Jen is fit, but very petite, especially compared to Titania. Titania is tall and statuesque… while she has tightly defined muscles, they’re not as bulging as She-Hulk’s.

Panel 1: A large panel showing the extent of the destruction as Titania is clutching Jen tightly. Jen is struggling and trying to escape.

TITANIA

Come on, get angry! I’m not interested in your scrawny ass… I want to fight her!

JEN

Hnngh!

JEN (thought balloon)

Damn! She doesn’t know that my transformation is different when I’m not angry…

Panel 2: A closeup on Jen’s face, showing just how smothered she is, face squeezed between Titania’s taut bicep and huge, squishy tits. Jen’s eyes are turning bright green as her transformation begins.

JEN (thought balloon)

But when I’m horny!

Panel 3: The next three panels are sequential. A side angle view looking at Jenna’s hips and thighs. A small tent is formed in her tight fitting skirt as her small cock is stiffening, stretching out the fabric of her skirt.

Panel 4: Jen’s skin begins to turn green, muscles forming in her thighs as the cock bulge grows bigger, starting to lift her skirt up to expose her growing balls cradled in her tight fitting black panties.

Panel 5: As Jens’s skin turns green her legs are bulging with muscles. Her stockings are beginning to rip, her skirt lifted up entirely and exposing her still-growing cock… although it’s still mostly hidden by her panties, but they’re also beginning to rip.

Page 2: Jen completes her transformation into She-Hulk as she wrestles with Titania

Panel 1: A low-angle view focused on Jen as her breasts begin to swell, straining her top and making the buttons of her suit jacket pop open. She’s still held in a headlock by Titania, her hands gripping Titania’s forearm and trying to pull it away.

JEN

Hnngh…

Panel 2: The same view as her skin begins to turn green, her jacket beginning to rip as her muscles grow, gritting her teeth as her breasts swell even bigger, her top starting to tear as well. Her fingers dig more roughly into Titania’s forearm.

JEN

Grrrrr…

Panel 3: The same view again as Jen fullytransforms into She-Hulk. Her Suit Jacket is completely destroyed by her bulging muscles. Her tits swelling so big that her blouse is mostly destroyed, exposing her taut, glistening abs as she roars and tears Titania’s arm from her neck.

SHE-HULK

Graaaaa!

Panel 4: She-Hulk stands and throws Titania against a nearby wall, flipping Titania upside-down in the process

SHE-HULK

Get off!

SFX

Crash!

Panel 5: She-Hulk stands at her full height. Her clothing is reduced to shreds. Standing in a battle-ready pose, hair in her face as she glowers. However, her massive erection is standing thick and strong, obvious for anyone to see.

SHE-HULK

Okay, MacPherran… you wanted me… You got me!

Page 3: Titania sees She-Hulk’s cock and instantly becomes aroused.

Panel 1: She-Hulk’s bulging green cockhead is visible in the foreground. Titania has two facial expressions visible, connected by motion blur. The first expression yelling angrily at She-Hulk, while the other has turned to stare in awe at She-Hulk’s huge cock.

TITANIA

That’s Titania, you big green bimb-Oooooh!

Panel 2: Titania is standing up, holding her hand to her mouth and biting her thumb erotically. She has a sort of Yandere expression of horniness as she looks at She-Hulk’s newly grown appendage.

TITANIA

Ohh, Shulkie… I didn’t know you felt that way about me…

Panel 3: She-Hulk’s face turns a deeper shade of green as she pulls on her skirt, trying to cover her bulging cock, but all she’s managing to do is rip her already-strained skirt even further.

SHE-HULK

J-just ignore that!  You wanted a fight, didn’t you!?

Panel 4: Titania is grinning as she squeezes her big tits together, massaging them lewdly as she tries to seduce her long-time rival.

TITANIA

Mmm… there are lots of ways to fight…

Panel 5: Still flustered, She-Hulk is shouting at Titania who is stepping confidently toward her while casually flipping her hair aside, shaking her hips seductively as she walks.

SHE-HULK

Are you serious!? What would your husband think!

TITANIA

Oh, SHIELD arrested Crusher months ago… and you know a woman has needs…

Page 4: Titania has gone full seductive mode, starting to strip for She-Hulk while She-Hulk is visibly struggling to resist.

Panel 1: Titania turns around, pulling her already tight-fitting costume up into a thong, showing off her juicy, muscular butt. Twisting her spin so She-Hulk can see her big tits as well. Licking her lips seductively

TITANIA

Like what you see?

Panel 2: She-Hulk is backing up, tripping a bit over her own partially destroyed desk. Her dick is rock hard and starting to leak precum as Titania’s juicy ass is jiggling in the foreground.

SHE-HULK

Are you serious!? If you want to fight, then let’s just fight!

Panel 3: Titania is grinning, holding her hands behind her head, holding up her long hair as she twerks her big booty. Making it clap as she looks back over her shoulder, grinning as she’s loving how uncomfortable she’s making She-Hulk

TITANIA

Ooh yes, fight me! And I know what big, bulging muscle you can use!

Panel 4: Titania has a seductive look on her face she is twisting to the side, lifting up her breast, pulling aside the fabric of her costume to expose her plump pink nipple. Licking it teasingly as she looks back over her shoulder.

TITANIA

Come on, Slut-Hulk… don’t you want to…

Panel 5: A similar panel to the previous panel, but this time Titania is biting on her nipple teasingly, pulling it with her teeth

TITANIA

Punish me?

Page 5: She-Hulk can’t hold back any longer. Struggling to resist, but she just can’t hold back any longer.

Panel 1: She-Hulk is tensing all her muscles. Eyes screwed shut, teeth gritted. Sweat starting to form on her body as she tries to resist her body’s urges, but her raging, veiny erection makes it clear she’s barely resisting.

SHE-HULK (thought balloon)

No! Hold back! Don’t think about her juicy ass! Stop imagining pounding her senseless and hearing her moan! Don’t envision what it will look like to pump her married holes full of gallons of hot, thick, gloppy cum!

Panel 2: She-Hulk’s big strong hands clap down on Titania’s ass. Her big butt is in the foreground, Titania bent over and grinning in victory as she’s succeeded in seducing She-Hulk.

SFX

Clap!

TITANIA

Heh! I knew a bimbo slut like you couldn’t resist!

Panel 3: She-Hulk doesn’t even bother to take off or pull aside the fabric of Titania’s costume… instead plunging her huge dick directly into her asshole, shoving the fabric inside as Titania moans in shock.

TITANIA

Hnghaaah! H-hey, not so rough!

Panel 4: She-Hulk has grabbed Titania’s arms by the elbows. Hips jackhammering Titania’s asshole. Making her buns ripple as Titania moans and shouts, overwhelmed by the girth and strength of She-Hulk, who seems to be in a mindless sex-rage

TITANIA

Ohh! Oh fuck! You’re gonna ruin my costume, you bitch!

SHE-HULK

Graaa!

Panel 5: A closeup on Titania’s face. She’s biting her lip and trembling. A look of mixed pleasure and pain on her face as her asshole is pummeled violently.

TITANIA

Hnnghh!

TITANIA (thought balloon)

I may have bit off more than I can chew...