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So I wanted to see if i could make the cover to this comic a parody of a Star Wars poster... but of course, most of the Star Wars posters are these huge group shots showing off all the characters and maybe with a big face in the background. But one particular poster really stuck out to me as visually striking which featured just two characters... the mostly-unused poster for Return of the Jedi when it was still called Revenge of the Jedi.

I've also attached the script for the story... or rather, the first five pages. I haven't quite gotten to scripting the whole thing just yet, but I was hoping to get some feedback and suggestions on what I've written so far, and maybe some ideas for how this chapter should end or anything specific people would want to see in this chapter.

The most unique thing about this chapter is Ahsoka's daughter... I kind of deliberately chose this poster not just for the two characters, but because one character is almost completely obscured. I wanted to get some feedback on my ideas for her before committing fully to her design. If you remember at the end of the first Star Whores, Ahsoka impregnated Padme, and you can see in the page that two separate eggs were seeded. The premise sort of being that, instead of being impregnated by Anakin, int his alternate timeline Padme is impregnated by Ahsoka, so rather than Leia and Luke, it's Laya and Luuka. In this timeline Anakin is killed by Ahsoka at some point, and Padme manages to survive childbirth. So Padme basically takes on the role that Leia had in the rebellion, and Laya is covertly trained as a Jedi by Obi-Wan. I hadn't really thought of any ideas for Luuka... I wasn't planning to show him in this chapter at all. Anyway, I just wanted to make sure that this alternate timeline made sense to everyone. We're still pretty early in this process so I'm very open to suggestions and ideas. Even if you have an idea that won't necessarily directly impact the story, anything that helps to flesh out the story and characters helps.