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A couple of fantasy adventurers^^

Let me know if there're mistakes in the text.

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Anonymous

Какая прелесть

Anonymous

Change these to those.

Anonymous

Отлично! Спасибо за арт))

CAsh

"I-Its not like I want you to ravish me or anything!"

Anonymous

The only mistake I see here is you not introducing them to me sooner

Brian

“Just a scratch”, not “just a scrtch”

Blue-LeadersQ

AwesomeWork 👍👏😸😚😀😉😃😄😆🤗😇

Anonymous

Охрененно!

The Silver Socialist

The correct syntax of the barbarian's statement would be "Don't worry noble girl. It's just a scratch." It you want to make her sound more primitive (like Grash) you could have her say "Don't worry noble girl. It just a scratch".

The Silver Socialist

It wouldn't make sense for someone to say Of course I don't worry about you. They would say "Of course I'm not worried about you.".

The Silver Socialist

You should have her say "need you to able able to cover my back" or "need you to cover my back".

Anonymous

I see no errors. I just see a sexy barbarian girl and an adorable and cute noble, armored girl. <3