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It's... 2:34 AM in the morning, I've just finished random testing, and uploaded everything. Hopefully, it should work.

Breach: Chicago War Zone - 11th October 2020 - WIP has been released. It contains Part 1 of Chapter 1. You may play it on the link below.

DashingDon Playtest 

If the link above doesn't work, try this one - https://dashingdon.com/play/Maxwell121415/bcwz/mygame/

There's not much of a log in terms of what has changed, because this is the first Alpha and we didn't start logging the changes until about 80% through development, and most of the MISC engine logs are in Ben's possession.

  • - Shooting is now only used for pin-point shooting.
  • - Weaponry check is now used for general shooting.
  • - New Script wepshot - empties the entire magazine, reloads if empty already - to be used with Weaponry check
  • - Added Giveinjury
  • - Added dead return, var 99
  • - VAM MedCare (Medical & Healthcare)
  • - FBI Side has Weaponry checks
  • - ARC side has Shooting checks

I'm very sorry for the delays. Eventhough I've paused this month's billing, all patrons can still enjoy this, as a huge thanks for everyone's patience, and an apology for how long it took, and how little we ended up releasing.


... Though the entire thing, right now, is already more then 100,000 words. So, that's something.


Stay safe, much love! <3

I'm tired, good night.

EDIT UPDATE: Uploaded a tiny update for the romances and other bugs. Everything else will be piled for the next update when the public version comes out.

Comments

Anonymous

😁 Thanks for all the hard work you guys are awesome

Anonymous

You've done so well, have a good night! Much love from Sweden😁🇸🇪

Dusty

Love the stats screen my dude and right back atcha

Anonymous

Heyy, great job! Just a heads up, Anna and Charlie as a love interest keep sipping through other storylines. For example, I chose Gabriel and got Anna instead.

Kiyan

Thank you for delivering all the good stuff!! Hope you get some good rest :)

Anonymous

As an Illinoian I love that it’s set in Chicago, I know it’s not very helpful but I love the first game and I love the second game as well I appreciate you all thank you for making me happy ♥️🤗

NyxExodus

No need for apologies! It’s worth the wait! The only buggy thing were the love interest, gabe is my main but I got Justin??

Anonymous

I was expecting gabriel and got Anna in that scene and was like WOAH 😳 but okay 🤷🏽‍♀️ Anna is my fave girl

Anonymous

Of course the Demo would end in *THAT* exact place 😭😭 Its a fantastic start to this book. I loved the pacing of it, I often find the middle book lacking and am disappointed but this was really good!

Anonymous

can i load my character from the first game here or no?

Anonymous

So excited to see this here. A few typos here and there but can't blame you for that since you uploaded at like 3am.

Anonymous

Also, I had the same problem a few others did, the love interest seems to be zeroed in on whoever your uriel is. So that's a weird scene. Also full character creation and essentials only seem to be the same.

Anonymous

I just wanted to point out a paragraph in the story where you may wish to redo the wording here.. ~You hold him still and you see him trying to break free, but alas, you close in, and stare him down with all your pouring every bit of horrible thought into your gaze.~ would it not sound better to put -You hold him still and you see him trying to break free, but alas, you close in, and stare him down while pouring every bit of horrible thought into your gaze.- I hope I am not overstepping here by making a suggestion.

Anonymous

Also at this section ~He sags his head down once more, accepting his face as Michael rolls up the map once more and stores it away in his suit jacket.~ I believe that where you put face you was meaning fate if I am not mistaken.

Anonymous

here are two more places ~"It'll quite the daring travel and absolutely nasty, but you'll be hidden and you can go about things quietly" I believe it would be better to say -it'll be quite the daring travel...- then there is ~"However it is we get into the cargo bay, from there, we go through to the vault access, go down in the basement, open the vault, get the money, and get out" Mouse says.~ where it says "However it is we get.. I think it should be "However if we get.."

Anonymous

Okay sorry but this will be my last comment for now lol. parallel to the sough side of the basement~ soigh is supposed to be south

Anonymous

It is quite shocking then when I chose Raquel as my girl and in downtime scene where you wake up to someone holding you hand and low and behold.., It was Justin, i was like what the.. lol

Anonymous

Lol right. I have waited forever to be reunited with Gabe and suddenly Anna is in bed with me.

Anonymous

The story thus far is awesome, so much so that when it stopped the demo I was like oh damn.., I feel like I am watching some major cliffhanger from a favorite television show or something lol. I can not wait for more. Thank you so much for this huge reprieve from the hellish year we all have been having. You folks there are beyond awesome, Thanks once again!

Anonymous

I actually haven't finished the demo yet (I'm loving it though), but I just noticed the compliments in the stat screen and I had to come and comment to say how much I love that as a feature. It just made me smile and I really needed that today. Thank you so much for all the hard work you've all been doing!

Anonymous

THANK YOU THANK YOU WIP!!!!!!

Anonymous

Duuuuude I can't believe the demo's here. THANKYOU!!