I remake the eyes (Patreon)

Because i can't satisfied the drawings (left side) after modifying, it looks good(right side)
But it failed🥲🥲 because the size of the left and right printed eyes are different. However i didn't realize that before finished it so i eventually make 3 eyes which are about to go into trashcan

Anyway, i tried to use English without translator it'll be big help if you fix my words!