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Spent some time on this guy. It bugs me that his design is way too close to a blonde version of Flynn Rider from Tangled. I am a hack. The way I drew him in chapter 1 really bugs me too. I want to retcon his face a lot haha. I also threw in some Alfie for height comparison. I feel like I almost completly failed to convey the height difference between halflings and humans so far.

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Anonymous

Man InCase you are way too hard on yourself. I think you've done a pretty good job so far. Though I personally would love to see a recon of Ch 1 but that's just me.

Anonymous

Just the right height for the hobbit girls to be walking around with cocks in their faces all day. XD

Tazmatwo

I agree, your much to hard on yourself. I can't wait to see more Alfie.

Anonymous

Don't be hard on yourself about the conveying the size difference. It's not easy. It can be made obvious by how you proportion your female, but you risk introducing a serious squick factor. I found that out when working on my own art. So, yeah, it's looking good. Can't wait for more.

DrJackal 035

Wow. That looks really good.

Didi Solomon

Yep. Being way too hard on yourself. (Though I did think the halflings were about a head taller than that.) Don't worry about fixing the past -- just keep moving forward!

InCaseArt

I'll most likely redraw it (and rewrite some dialogue) in the future. It's not representative of the quality of the rest of the comic and I am afraid it would scare people away before they reach chapter 2.

InCaseArt

It's really easy to accidentally make them look like fat kids with big tits D: .

Anonymous

Just starting to read the comics from the beginning ;p gotta say.... marco is hot *.*... heh anyway if ch 1 being so good is lackluster according to you cant wait to get to next chapters :>