AbbyCapers (Patreon) Bonnefant (pt. 3): Slimy Served! (Patreon)

Synopsis/Description: 

 It's probably not a good idea to drink whatever your slime captors force-feed you Abby... Just sayin'.
Oh, and who's this?  

Part 3! of...?
Original idea by Heron Angel on Deviantart 

Process Gif:

The Rant: 

Something I like about whenever Abby is naked, is how much less texture work I have to do to sell that she's covered in something. That made this comic a lot easier. About halfway through inking, I went back and read the story, and wondered if she was supposed to be wearing clothes at this point.  I don't think it comes up, because the more playful stuff comes later. No big worries; like earlier edits in the story, its a minor change, if its a problem (Heron didn't seem to think it was, when I showed her).

Something that did end up changing between the thumbnails and the pencils was Abby's placement in the second panel. A little too much negative space once the pencils were cleaned up, so that had to be added in. Something about thumbnails is that, because the lines are thicker (to, paradoxically, force the artist to be clearer with their shapes), when cleaned up to pencils, there's sudenly a lot of space where there wasn't originally, which leaves some big empty space that could/should be taken up with something. That's fine for this series, since it mostly takes place in a cave (yeah, the title implying it would be in/about/near the town is kinda misleading, in hindsight), and the mystery of Abby's surroundings is better enhanced by the lack of detail, but its still a bad habit to mostly be avoided.

I think that's mostly about it, though there is something odd about Abby being gagged, and the gag retreating in the final panel. I hope it comes across that something is being inserted down her throat, and if not, no worries. All should become clearer (and more fun) in future!

 What do you think? Let me know in the comments! Your feedback lets me know how I'm doing! Thank you for your continued support and patronage, and I'll catcha over yonder!

 -Saunter!