(N)abbyCapers (Patrons): Naomi-Nabbed! (Patreon)
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Synopsis/Description:
The odds don't look good for BoundPretties's Naomi as she tries to rescue Abby from Tanya's clutches. Can she do it-Oh, wait, never mind. There goes Nabby, with the nab! I guess two wrongs do make a right!
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The Rant:
So, it's been a while!
Honestly, as soon as I had the idea for Nabby, I knew I had to do this at SOME point. Either this, or a Game Over animation. And yeah, it HAD to be a two parter. For ref, here're the two parts side by side:
One of the hard things about these comics is how much has to be packed into them from a story standpoint, especially if the character hasn't been introduced in a previous AbbyCaper yet. Hopefully, both Naomi and Tanya's personalities shine through in these comics, especially without dialogue. Though I'm hoping to get some "commentary" from Tanya and Naomi from Bound Pretties, or their associated affiliates; Naomi's reactions to her predicaments tend to be pretty entertaining, and reinforce why its happening to her.
On a technical level, this one's kinda stuffed, huh? I find its actually better to be stuffed with content than have empty patches of negative space. Also, this is the second comic with no BG but a black void, but I think that only enhances the mystery and negativity of what Tanya and Nabby plan to do to Naomi and Abby, even if Tanya is way more benign and benevolent than Nabby. I also think the "doorway" breaks up the composition just enough that they're implied to be somewhere, rather than a black void. Also, it makes for a nice parallel to have Naomi standing in the doorway in the same way as Tanya, though that was unintentional on my part.
Naomi also gets two panels of attack, rather than just one, because I want it to be clear how Nabby subdues her, not just the initial attack. It also makes for another great parallel with part 1 (I promise, these weren't intentional!) where Nabby masquerades as someone's clothes, just this time as Abby's restraints, rather than Tanya's corset (you can bet she was having even more fun with Abby in the meantime).
As for why Abby and Naomi are restrained in traditional restraints, as opposed to Nabby's goo, well, I like naked bodies, and I like seeing restraints on naked bodies sometimes. I think its more faithful to BP's restraint style to have the gals all shibari-ed up, and I like the idea of blindfolds exciting their wearers by restricting their vision. Its even more so in the case of Naomi and Abby because Naomi knows EXACTLY what Tanya will do to her (which arouse-I mean, infuriates her) while Abby has no clue what Nabby will do to her (which also arouse-I mean, terrifies her)! Could this have been done with goo? Sure, but naked bodies feel more intimate and sensual (even for Nabby).
What do you guys think? Let me know in the comments; your feedback lets me know how I'm doing! Thanks for your continued patronage and I'll catcha over yonder!
-Saunter!