Pure Light chapter 03 - 17 (Patreon)

In the original script the Freedom Flyers talk like actual sociopaths. Which at the time was not an issue because Pure Light wasn't a very serious comic. And so the character acting like this situation is a big joke fitted. I wish the story had stayed that way. I'm the on to blame for the change in tone. I didn't pay attention to things like that at the time.

Now, when tidying up the script, I try to be tonaly consistent. Even if it feels more severe than I'd personally have liked it to be. Fewer quips and more getting to business.  RIP.

I will try to keep up the weekly updates.