Split (Patreon)
Published:
2023-11-12 19:57:52
Imported:
2023-12
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Here is a story that I wrote and sent through to some friends for comment. Erin thought it was too short, and it is true that I wanted the switch to be more gradual. Bu is the old story - the love interest turns up and everything accelerates. Bron said that she needed to re-read it to understand what had just happened, so I suppose it should stay short. Do any of my silent patrons have a view on this?