Inside Crossover (Patreon)

This is another for my next anthology of short stories "Workplace Romances", that I hope my publishers will put up on Amazon next month.  But this one is a relatively major work to underpin the book.  It is in fact, a reworking on an idea that I posted as a serial (my only one) on Fictionmania years ago as "Talk Show" which was formatted as a transcript of such a show discussing the fictional cop show.  I thought it might be clever but it was limited.  When I turned to rewrite as a narrative, even with my customary disregard for descriptive prose, it grew considerably.  What do you think?