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The prompt was "What were you thinking about?"  It is a good question.  I had Erin's seed but I took it somewhere else.  I suppose that my need for reality always makes me question the whole hypnosis thing.  This seems a little more credible, but what about the next one.

This nature of the ending also brings to mind a recent criticism I had on Fictionmania - "You insult your readers by throwing stuff on the wall to see if it sticks and calling it finished".  I for one have always thought that the hanging ending is so much a part of the short story, but not everybody agrees.