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This is from the story which sparked it last week when a reviewer said "You don't seem to have really engaged with this story which reads to me like an artist's sketch for a far more interesting story. I would love to see you paint that greater picture and can see why the image inspired you."  That is entirely accurate.  That is what the cap inspired things (which I post here as clusters) are.  But in this case I could not add much....

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John Chu

Frankly I thought “Shamed” was fine as it was. It was an elegant little vignette. Why extend it after the payoff? There are other stories of yours that begged for a denouement. This wasn’t really one.